自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and use correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then add one or two specific supporting details. Correct verb forms (e.g., 'taught' → 'taught myself' is wrong here; use 'taught myself' or 'learned to') and avoid filler words like 'like' and 'not really' together. Use linking words (e.g., 'but', 'however') correctly to connect ideas.

範例: No, I didn't have a bike as a child, and I still don't own one. I never learned to ride, so I chose not to get a bike; however, I did have a scooter, and I've always wanted to learn cycling in the future.

建議: Avoid hesitation sounds and be more precise. Give a clear opinion in the first sentence, then add specific reasons and a short comparison using linking words. Replace vague phrases ('a lot', 'these days') with concrete examples or brief explanations to make content more specific and coherent.

範例: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country. Few people cycle in cities because roads are busy and there are limited bike lanes; however, cycling becomes more common in summer when the weather is pleasant and people ride for exercise or leisure.

× Not really, I even don't have it right now.

✓ Not really, I don't even have one right now.

The sentence uses 'even' in the wrong position and 'have it' is awkward when referring to a bike in general; außerdem the present simple negative should be 'I don't even have'. Move 'even' after the auxiliary and use 'one' to refer to a bike mentioned earlier. Also 'even don't' is nonstandard word order. Suggestion: Use 'I don't even have one' or 'I don't even have a bike'.

× Like I've never taught myself how to cycle so I decided not to ever get a bike but I have always wanted to learn how to cycle.

✓ I've never taught myself how to cycle, so I decided never to get a bike, but I have always wanted to learn.

The original mixes tenses and uses awkward adverb placement ('not to ever get' is nonstandard). Use present perfect 'I've never taught myself' for experience up to now. Put 'never' before 'to get' (or use 'decided not to get a bike') and shorten 'wanted to learn how to cycle' to 'wanted to learn' to avoid repetition. Ensure consistent tense and natural adverb placement. Suggestion: 'I've never taught myself how to cycle, so I decided never to get a bike, but I've always wanted to learn.'

× I had a scooter though.

✓ I had a scooter, though.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable; only a minor punctuation change is recommended to place 'though' after a comma. No plural/singular error. Keep as 'I had a scooter, though.'

× I don't really see many people cycle on the streets these days.

✓ I don't really see many people cycling on the streets these days.

When describing people performing an action seen in progress, use the -ing form after verbs of perception or after 'see' in this context: 'see many people cycling' (or 'see many people ride bikes'). 'See many people cycle' is not idiomatic in this context. Suggestion: Use 'see many people cycling' or 'see many people riding bikes.'

× I would say however they are more popular in summer than they are in the other seasons because during the summer people cycle a lot because of the weather.

✓ I would say, however, that they are more popular in summer than in other seasons, because people cycle a lot in summer due to the weather.

The original sentence needs a clearer structure: insert 'that' after 'however' and remove the redundant second 'because' and 'the'. Also prefer 'in other seasons' rather than 'in the other seasons.' Repetition of 'because' and 'during the summer' is redundant. Suggestions: 'I would say, however, that they are more popular in summer than in other seasons, because people cycle more in summer due to the weather.'