自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Lưu ý ngữ pháp, phát âm và tính mạch lạc. Câu trả lời nên bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó thêm 1–2 câu chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: nơi bạn thường đi, với ai, cảm giác khi học). Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như thì động từ (learned), giới từ (to/around/to my friend's town), và từ sai (angle, why). Sử dụng liên từ đơn giản để nối ý (for example, when, because). Giữ tổng số câu không quá 5.

範例: Yes, I had a small yellow bike when I was a child. I learned to ride it when I was about five, practicing every afternoon near my house. I often rode to my friend’s street with him, and I felt proud whenever I could ride without help.

建議: Câu trả lời không trả lời đúng câu hỏi và chứa lỗi từ vựng (price thay vì ‘bikes’ or ‘they’). Nên trả lời trực tiếp (Yes/No/It depends) với một câu chủ đề, rồi bổ sung 1–2 lý do cụ thể (ví dụ: tiện lợi, rẻ, giao thông) và dùng liên từ để nối ý. Tránh câu ngắn thiếu thông tin.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. Many people use them to commute to work or school, especially in crowded cities where traffic is bad.

× I used to ride around my neighborhood angle to my friends town and I learnt to why it's when I was about five

✓ I used to ride around my neighborhood and go to my friend's town, and I learned how to ride when I was about five.

The sentence has several past-tense and word-choice problems. 'Angle' is incorrect and should be 'and go to' to connect ideas. 'friends town' needs possessive form 'friend's town'. 'Learnt to why it's' is ungrammatical; the intended meaning is 'learned how to ride'. Use the past simple 'learned' to match 'used to' and 'was about five'. Suggestion: simplify into clear clauses with correct past tense verbs and correct possessive form.

× In my country, price is popular.

✓ In my country, bicycles are popular.

The original sentence 'price is popular' is nonsensical: 'price' is not something that can be 'popular'. The student likely meant 'bikes' or 'bicycles'. This is a sentence structure and word-choice error. Use the plural noun 'bicycles' with the plural verb 'are' to match subject-verb agreement. Suggestion: use the correct noun and plural verb to express popularity.