自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve grammar (past tense and pronouns), clarity and coherence. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, use correct pronouns and verbs, and avoid unrelated or incorrect phrases (e.g., 'shy', 'lie with'). Add one or two specific supporting details linked with simple connectors (for example, 'when', 'and', 'so'). Keep answers concise (max 5 sentences).

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My mother bought it for me when I was four, and it had training wheels so I could practice safely. I remember riding around our small garden with my sister while my parents watched. By the time I was six I could ride without the training wheels.

建議: Focus on accurate grammar (subject–verb agreement, articles, and sentence connectors), more precise vocabulary, and a clear structure: state your opinion, give 2 specific reasons with linking words, and conclude briefly. Use plural/singular agreement (bikes are, government doesn't), and capitalize sentence starts. Provide concrete examples or consequences to strengthen your answer.

範例: I don't think bicycles are very popular in Thailand. One reason is that the government has not built many dedicated bike lanes, which makes cycling unsafe in cities. Another reason is the lack of cycling infrastructure such as secure bike parking and signage, so people prefer cars and motorcycles. As a result, biking is more common only in parks or rural areas.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was shy.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The original mixes present tense 'have' with past time 'when I was'. Use past tense 'had' to match 'when I was a child'. Also 'shy' is incorrect context; 'a child' matches the question about childhood. Suggestion: use past tense for past events and choose appropriate noun phrases for meaning.

× My mom bought for me when I was four and I tried to practice it with three wheels.

✓ My mom bought one for me when I was four, and I learned to ride it with three wheels.

Omit the unnecessary preposition 'for' after 'bought' when the object follows; use 'bought one for me' or 'bought it for me'. Also 'tried to practice it with three wheels' is awkward for acquiring the skill; use 'learned to ride it with three wheels'. Use past tense consistently ('bought', 'learned').

× I used to lie with my sister and my family.

✓ I used to ride with my sister and my family.

The verb 'lie' is incorrect here; context requires 'ride' (to use a bike). 'Used to' is correct for habitual past actions. Replace 'lie' with 'ride' to convey the intended meaning.

× No, I don't think so.

✓ No, I don't think so.

This sentence is grammatically correct and matches the present-tense question asking for an opinion. No change needed.

× In Thailand bikes isn't popular enough because government didn't support bicycle lane and we don't have cycling infrastructure.

✓ In Thailand, bikes aren't popular enough because the government didn't support bicycle lanes and we don't have cycling infrastructure.

Subject-verb agreement: 'bikes' (plural) requires 'aren't' rather than 'isn't'. Add the definite article 'the' before 'government'. 'Bicycle lane' should be plural 'bicycle lanes' to match meaning. Use past tense 'didn't support' is fine; ensure articles and plural forms are correct.

× so we have to use transportation of cars and motorcycles instead.

✓ So we have to use cars and motorcycles for transportation instead.

Sentence should start with a capital letter 'So'. 'Use transportation of cars and motorcycles' is awkward; better: 'use cars and motorcycles for transportation' or 'use cars and motorcycles instead.' Rearranged for natural English word order.