自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Порада: Додайте коротке вступне речення, яке прямо відповідає на запитання, а потім логічно розширте відповідь конкретними деталями. Уникайте зайвих повторів і розділяйте думки на 2–3 речення. Наприклад, скажіть, коли саме ви отримали велосипед, яка була поломка та як ви почувалися після цього. Використовуйте зв’язки (for example, because, so) щоб зробити відповідь більш плавною.

範例: Yes, I had a bike as a child. I got it as a birthday present when I was eight, but it broke on the first day because the chain came off. I felt really upset because I had wanted that bike for a long time, so I cried and asked my parents to fix it.

建議: Порада: Почніть з чіткої думки (так/ні/частково), потім поясніть причини й наведіть приклад. Уникайте неформальних конструкцій і граматичних помилок; використовуйте зв’язки (however, because, for example) щоб логічно поєднати думки. Зробіть відповідь лаконічною (2–3 речення).

範例: I think bikes are fairly popular in my country, but their use depends on the person. For example, many people cycle for exercise or short trips, while others prefer cars because they are more comfortable and safer for long journeys.

× Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The sentence is correct. The past simple 'had' is appropriate to describe possession in childhood. No change needed. Suggestion: None.

× It broke on the first day I used it so I was very upset and cried because I had wanted it for a long time.

✓ It broke on the first day I used it, so I was very upset and cried because I had wanted it for a long time.

Main issue: punctuation and linking of clauses rather than grammar forms. The past simple 'broke' and 'used' correctly describe events; past perfect 'had wanted' correctly shows desire before the breaking. Suggestion: add a comma before 'so' to join independent clauses properly.

× Okay maybe I think yes but It's more some people like I like riding and some people like riding on a car but I am a people who want to climb in a car because it's too relaxed and safe.

✓ Okay, maybe I think so. Some people like riding bicycles, and some people prefer riding in a car. I am a person who wants to get into a car because it is more comfortable and safer.

Multiple errors: incorrect pronoun use, article errors, awkward phrasing and word choice. Problems map to 'sentence structure errors' and also 'incorrect use of pronouns' and 'article errors'. Specific issues: 'It's more some people like I like riding' is ungrammatical; use 'maybe I think so' or 'maybe yes.' 'Riding on a car' is incorrect; say 'riding in a car.' 'I am a people' is wrong; use 'I am a person.' 'Climb in a car' is awkward—use 'get into a car.' 'Too relaxed and safe' should be 'more comfortable and safer.' Suggestions: break into shorter sentences, use correct collocations (ride a bicycle, ride in a car), use singular 'person' and comparatives 'more comfortable/safer.'