自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your response simply repeated the examiner's question instead of answering it. For a higher score, answer directly with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep the total response under five sentences and avoid redundancy. For example, say whether you had a bike, mention who taught you or how often you used it, and give a brief reason or memory.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used it almost every day to go to school and visit friends, and my father taught me to ride when I was six. Because our neighborhood was quiet and safe, I felt free to explore on my bike.

建議: Your answer addresses the question and gives reasons, but it is wordy and slightly repetitive. To improve, start with a concise topic sentence, use a linking word to introduce a specific reason, and include one brief example or statistic to make the point more concrete. Aim for clearer, more varied vocabulary and avoid repeating words like 'traffic' and 'country'.

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in India. For example, many commuters choose motorbikes because they are quicker in heavy traffic and cheaper to run; as a result, two-wheelers make up a large proportion of vehicles on the roads.

× Yes, in my country bikes are very popular because of the traffic situation.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because of the traffic situation.

The original sentence is understandable but has awkward word order. Placing 'bikes are very popular in my country' is more natural English sentence structure. Suggestion: put the subject and complement together and then add the reason: '...in my country because...'.

× The traffic the country that I come from is India and the population and traffic is a lot over there so people do prefer travelling on bike to avoid getting stuck in the traffic and passing over through the cars.

✓ I come from India, which has a large population and heavy traffic, so people prefer travelling by bike to avoid getting stuck in traffic and being stuck among cars.

This sentence has multiple structural problems: misplaced phrases, run-on with repeated 'traffic', and awkward expressions like 'passing over through the cars'. Corrections made: start with 'I come from India' then use a relative clause 'which has...' to combine ideas. Use 'large population and heavy traffic' for natural collocation. Use 'prefer travelling by bike' (preposition 'by' with 'bike') and 'avoid getting stuck in traffic' (no article). Replace 'passing over through the cars' with 'being stuck among cars' or remove it. Suggestion: break long sentences into shorter clauses and use standard collocations (heavy traffic, by bike, get stuck in traffic).

× But yes, bikes are very popular.

✓ But yes, bikes are very popular.

This short sentence is grammatically correct and needs no change. It is included to confirm there is no preposition error here. Keep it as is.