自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve accuracy, grammar and word choice; be concise and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct key verbs (ride, rode), and avoid repetition. Use one or two supporting details (how often, what happened to the bike) linked with words like "but" or "so." Keep answers under five sentences.

範例: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child and I rode it every day. However, it broke a few years ago, so I don't use it anymore. Now I usually travel by motorcycle when I need to go out.

建議: Make the response more natural and specific. Begin with a direct topic sentence, then add a brief reason or example using linking words like "because" or "for example." Avoid awkward phrasing such as "I am the one that."

範例: Yes, bicycles and motorbikes are very popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient. For example, many people use motorbikes to commute to work, especially in busy cities where traffic is heavy.

× Yes, when I was a child I used to have one bite and I write every day.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I used to have one bike and I rode it every day.

The word 'bite' is a typo for 'bike' (vocabulary), and 'write every day' is incorrect verb choice and tense. The past habitual action should use past tense 'rode' to match 'used to'. Suggestion: replace 'write' with 'ride' and use past tense 'rode' to indicate habitual action in the past.

× But now, uh, it's broken already and I didn't write it anymore.

✓ But now it's already broken and I don't ride it anymore.

The sentence mixes past tense 'didn't' with present situation 'now'. Use present simple negative 'don't ride' to express a current habitual action that no longer happens. Also 'write' should be 'ride'. 'Already' is better placed after 'it's' or before 'broken'. Suggestion: use present simple negative for current habits and correct the verb to 'ride'.

× I ride motorcycle.

✓ I ride a motorcycle.

The sentence lacks the indefinite article 'a' before the singular countable noun 'motorcycle'. English requires an article (a/an) for singular countable nouns. Suggestion: add 'a' to form 'a motorcycle'.

× Yes it is quite popular in my country and I am the one that like to ride the bikes every day in my country.

✓ Yes, they are quite popular in my country and I am one of the people who like to ride bikes every day.

Agreement and pronoun problems: 'bikes' as plural require plural pronoun 'they' rather than 'it'. 'I am the one that like' is awkward and incorrect: use 'one of the people who like' to express membership and keep verb agreement 'like' after 'who'. Also avoid repeating 'in my country'. Suggestion: use 'they are' for plural, rephrase to 'one of the people who like to ride bikes every day'.