自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Speak in the past tense and organize your answer with a clear topic sentence, a brief reason, and a short additional detail. Use correct verb forms and reduce repetitions. For example, start with a clear statement that you didn’t have a bike, then give a concise reason (your mother was worried) and one short consequence or feeling. Keep it to 2–3 sentences and use linking words like “because” or “so.”

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my mother was afraid I would have an accident. As a result, she didn’t buy me one, so I learned to walk or use public transport instead.

建議: Give a clear topic sentence answering the question, then add specific supporting details using linking words. Correct word choice (bikes, teenagers) and clear reasons (health, commuting, cost) will make your answer more effective. Limit to 2–3 sentences and avoid unclear phrases like “so in eating.”

範例: Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country. Many teenagers and adults cycle in the morning to improve their fitness and some people use bicycles to commute because it is cheap and convenient.

× No I don't have a bad win.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike.

The student uses present tense 'don't have' and incorrect words 'bad win'. The question asks about the past ('when you were a child'), so past tense is required. Also the noun intended is 'bike'. Use past simple negative 'didn't have' for a past state. Suggestion: learn past simple negative formation: subject + did not + base verb.

× I were a child because my mom was scared when I'm try a bike and she's scared if if I have a accident so she didn't buy me a bought me a bike when I was out.

✓ I was a child when my mom was scared when I tried a bike, and she was afraid I would have an accident, so she didn't buy me a bike when I was young.

Multiple errors: 'I were' should be 'I was' (subject-verb agreement in past simple). 'I'm try' mixes present and base verb; correct is past 'I tried'. 'She's scared if if I have a accident' should be 'she was afraid I would have an accident' — use past reporting and 'would' for potential past consequence; 'a accident' requires article 'an'. 'didn't buy me a bought me a bike' is redundant and incorrect; use 'didn't buy me a bike'. Also 'when I was out' is unnatural for childhood; use 'when I was young' or omit. Suggestions: ensure past tense consistency and correct article usage before vowel sounds.

× Yes, I think buys are popular in my country because of teenagers on way back in morning to improve their health so in eating.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because teenagers ride them on their way to school in the morning to improve their health and as part of exercise.

'buys' is a misspelling; should be 'bikes'. 'teenagers on way back in morning' lacks verbs and correct prepositions; use 'teenagers ride them on their way to school in the morning'. 'to improve their health so in eating' is unclear and ungrammatical; clarify purpose as 'to improve their health and as exercise'. Suggestions: use correct nouns, include verbs for actions, and link purposes with 'and' or 'as'.