自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Give a direct past-tense answer, use correct grammar, and add one short supporting detail. Keep it natural and concise (max 5 sentences). Use a clear topic sentence then a brief reason or memory. For example, correct verb tense: “I didn’t have a bike when I was a child.” Then add a specific detail: where you lived, why, or what you used instead.

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. We lived in a small apartment so my parents thought it wasn’t safe to keep one, so I usually walked to school or took the bus.

建議: Answer directly, use plural and correct verb forms, and provide specific supporting details with linking words. Avoid unclear phrases (e.g., “love to write”). Keep to 1–3 sentences with a topic sentence and 1–2 supporting points (reasons, examples). Use linking words like “because,” “so,” or “for example.”

範例: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country because they are affordable and practical for short trips. For example, many people use bikes to commute to work or to the market, especially in crowded cities where driving is difficult.

× No, I don't have any bike when I'm a child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

Problems identified: 5 (Past tense issue), 1 (Singular and plural issue), 22 (Article errors), 27 (Subject-verb agreement) and 12 (Incorrect use of pronouns/word choice). The question asks about the past, so use past simple 'didn't have' instead of present 'don't have'. Use 'a bike' (singular with article) rather than 'any bike' for this affirmative/negative past statement. Also use past time clause 'when I was a child' rather than 'when I'm a child'. Suggestion: Use consistent past tense throughout the sentence and correct article usage: 'No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.'

× Yes, I think bike is most popular in my country because it is affordable and everybody love it and they love to write I think so it's important.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because they are affordable, everyone loves them, and many people ride them; I think this is important.

Problems identified: 2 (Third person singular issue), 1 (Singular and plural issue), 11 (Incorrect use of pronouns/word choice), 27 (Subject-verb agreement) and 26 (Sentence structure errors). Use plural 'bikes' and plural verb 'are'. 'Everybody' (singular) takes 'loves' and refers to 'them' for bikes, so change 'everybody love it' to 'everyone loves them'. 'Love to write' is incorrect in context; likely intended 'love to ride', so replace with 'ride them' or 'many people ride them'. Also tighten sentence structure and add commas or semicolon to link ideas. Suggestion: Use plural nouns and matching verbs, choose correct verb ('ride' not 'write'), and break long run-on sentences into clearer parts.