自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer more clearly and naturally. Start with a direct topic sentence (Yes/No), then give one or two brief supporting details using correct grammar and linking words. Fix grammar: use past tense and correct phrases (e.g., "my parents couldn't afford one" or "we didn't have enough money"). Keep it to no more than 3–4 short sentences.

範例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. My parents couldn't afford one at the time, so I usually walked or used public transport to get around. Later, when I was older, I borrowed a friend's bike sometimes.

建議: Expand the answer with a clear opinion sentence followed by specific reasons and a brief example. Use linking words such as "because" or "however" to connect ideas. Give at least one concrete detail (e.g., traffic, weather, infrastructure) to support your view.

範例: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country because our cities are crowded and the roads are not very safe for cyclists. For example, many people prefer cars or motorbikes since they are faster and more convenient for long trips.

× And he only says Dada no I don't have a bike because my parents weren't enough money.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike because my parents didn't have enough money.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and contains several grammatical issues. 'And he only says Dada' is unrelated to the question and likely incorrect reference; remove it to answer the question directly. 'I don't have a bike' should match the past tense of the question ('Did you have...') so use 'I didn't have a bike.' The clause 'my parents weren't enough money' uses 'were' incorrectly with 'money' and lacks the verb 'have.' Use 'my parents didn't have enough money.' Also ensure negative contraction matches past tense. Suggestion: keep pronouns consistent and match tense to the question by using past simple negatives ('didn't have').

× I don't think so.

✓ I don't think so.

The sentence 'I don't think so.' is grammatically correct for expressing a current opinion about a general fact. It uses the present simple appropriately. No change is needed. Note: if the student intended to refer to the past or future, tense should be adjusted, but for the examiner's question 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?' the present simple is appropriate.