自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cevap verirken zamanları doğru kullanmalı ve cümle yapısını basit ve net tutmalısınız. Öncelikle doğrudan konu cümlesi ile başlayın (ör. "Yes, I had a bike when I was a child."). Ardından kısa destekleyici detaylar ekleyin; örneğin bisikleti nerede kullandığınız, kim aldığını veya neden sevdiğinizi belirtin. Ayrıca gereksiz tekrarlardan kaçının ve geçmiş zamanı tutarlı şekilde kullanın.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it around my neighborhood every afternoon with my friends, and my parents bought it for me on my eighth birthday. I enjoyed riding because it gave me independence and helped me make friends.

建議: Cevap net bir görüş içermeli ve görüşünüzü destekleyen özgül nedenler veya örnekler eklemelisiniz. Başlangıçta açık bir konu cümlesi kullanın (ör. "Not very popular"). Sonra bağlaçlarla gerekçeler verin (ör. "because", "for example"), ve mümkünse bir karşılaştırma veya istatistiksel bir gözlem ekleyin. Ayrıca "etcetera" yerine somut örnekler verin ve cümleyi daha akıcı hale getirmek için basit bağlaçlar kullanın.

範例: Not very popular. I think most people prefer cars and public transit because they are faster and more convenient in cities, for example buses, trains and the metro. In rural areas some people use bikes for short trips, but overall cycling is not a primary mode of transport in my country.

× Yeah, I was a bike when I'm. I am child. Sorry, I have a bike when I am child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The original contains multiple structural and tense errors: 'I was a bike' is nonsensical (confuses subject and object), 'when I'm' mixes present contraction with past context, and 'I have a bike when I am child' uses present tense and misses an article. Correct sentence uses past simple 'had' for a past possession and 'a child' with the indefinite article. Suggestion: Use past simple for past situations (had), use correct word order (subject + verb + object), and include articles (a child).

× I don't think so because in my country people usually use car or train, metro etcetera

✓ I don't think so because in my country people usually use cars, trains, the metro, etcetera.

The sentence uses singular nouns 'car' and 'train' after a general plural reference 'people usually use', so plural nouns are required. Also 'metro' usually takes the definite article 'the' when referring to a city's metro system. Suggestion: Use plural forms for general statements (cars, trains) and include 'the' before specific public systems (the metro).