自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer does not address the question. Give a direct response (yes/no) with a brief topic sentence and one or two specific supporting details. Keep it natural, avoid single-word replies, and use linking words when adding details.

範例: Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child. I remember getting it as a birthday present when I was seven, and I used to ride it to my friend’s house every afternoon. Because it had training wheels at first, I learned to balance slowly and then removed them after a few weeks.

建議: Your answer is not relevant to the question. Give a clear opinion (yes/no/partly) as a topic sentence, then add specific reasons or examples using linking words to support your view. Keep responses concise (up to 5 sentences).

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. For instance, many people use shared bicycles for short trips because they are cheap and convenient, and the local government has built more bike lanes recently to encourage cycling.

× Shanna

✓ Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child.

The original reply 'Shanna' is not a complete or relevant answer to the examiner's question; it lacks a verb and sentence structure (Sentence structure errors, ID 26). The examiner asked 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?', which requires a past-tense reply. Use a complete sentence with subject and past tense verb: 'Yes, I did' or 'I had a bike when I was a child.' A clear improvement is to answer directly and in past tense: 'Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child.' Suggestion: Practice forming full responses that match the question's tense and include subject and verb.

× time.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country these days.

The original reply 'time.' is not a grammatically meaningful response to the question 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?'; it lacks subject, verb and meaning (Sentence structure errors, ID 26). The question asks for an opinion in the present tense, so respond with a present-tense statement using modal/opinion language such as 'I think' and an adjective like 'popular.' A good correction: 'Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country these days.' Suggestion: When asked for an opinion, begin with phrases like 'Yes, I think...' or 'No, I don't think...' and follow with a complete clause.