自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Говорите в прошедшем времени последовательно; избегайте повторов и пауз; стройте ответ из 2–3 информативных предложений. Конкретизируйте причину и эмоции, используя связующие слова (for example, so, because, therefore). Обратите внимание на правильные формы глаголов (had, thought) и порядок слов.

範例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my mother thought it was too dangerous for me. I was very disappointed at the time, so I often watched other children riding around our building.

建議: Отвечайте кратко и чётко, избегайте повторов и ненужных пауз. Дайте обобщение, затем привидите конкретные примеры или сравнения с объясняющими связками (for example, because, such as). Используйте правильные формы множественного числа и согласование (children have, many people use).

範例: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because many children and adults use them for short journeys. For example, in my apartment complex almost every child has a bike, and many people cycle to work to avoid traffic.

× When I, when I was child, I don't have a bike because my mother thinks, umm, because my mother thinked, uh, that the bike so dangerous for me and I'm so I was so sad about it, but I don't.

✓ When I was a child, I didn't have a bike because my mother thought it was too dangerous for me, and I was very sad about it.

Errors: incorrect present tense 'don't have' used for past situation, wrong past form 'thinked' instead of 'thought', missing article before 'child', incorrect structure 'that the bike so dangerous' missing verb and 'so' informal. Suggestions: Use past tense for past events (didn't have, thought, was), include the article 'a' in 'a child', use 'too dangerous' or 'very dangerous', and remove fillers. Example: 'When I was a child, I didn't have a bike because my mother thought it was too dangerous for me, and I was very sad about it.' Grammar problem type ID:6

× I think, I think, uh, bikes are so popular in my country because every PE, every child, uh, in my home apartments have a bike and uh, yes.

✓ I think bikes are very popular in my country because almost every child in my neighborhood has a bike.

Errors: awkward filler repetition and incorrect plural agreement 'every child ... have' should be 'has' (subject-verb agreement) and 'home apartments' is unnatural. Suggestions: Remove fillers, use 'almost every child' or 'every child' with singular verb 'has', and use 'neighborhood' or 'apartment complex' for clarity. Use 'very popular' instead of 'so popular' in formal speech. Example: 'I think bikes are very popular in my country because almost every child in my neighborhood has a bike.' Grammar problem type ID:6