自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời hiện tại quá ngắn, ngữ pháp không đúng (nên dùng thì quá khứ: "I had"), và chứa từ không phù hợp ("Bye"). Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp bằng câu chủ đề ở thì quá khứ rồi thêm 1–2 câu chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: loại xe, ai tặng, bao lâu bạn dùng). Dùng liên từ nếu cần mở rộng câu.

範例: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. It was a simple red bike that my parents bought me for my seventh birthday, and I rode it to school and around the neighborhood every day.

建議: Câu trả lời có ý nhưng bị nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, phát âm/chép sai từ và thiếu thông tin cụ thể. Nên trả lời trực tiếp, dùng lý do rõ ràng và chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: vì tiết kiệm, giao thông tắc, hoặc sở thích thể thao), dùng liên từ để nối ý (e.g., "because", "for example"). Tránh lỗi như "he's" và "bites"; dùng "there are a lot of bikes" hoặc "bicycles are common".

範例: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. For example, many people use bikes to commute to work or school to avoid traffic, and some cities have bike lanes that make cycling safer.

× Yes, I have. Bye.

✓ Yes, I did.

The examiner asked about a past habit (Did you have a bike when you were a child?). The student used present perfect 'I have' which is incorrect for a specific past time already mentioned ('when you were a child'). Use simple past 'I did' or a fuller response 'Yes, I did; I had a bike.' Suggestion: use simple past for actions completed in the past, e.g., 'Yes, I did' or 'Yes, I had a bike.'

× Yes, because in my country he's a lot of bites.

✓ Yes, because in my country there are a lot of bikes.

This sentence has multiple errors. 'he's' is incorrect pronoun/verb usage and likely a misspelling of 'there's' or 'there are'. The noun 'bites' is a misspelling of 'bikes'. For plural 'a lot of bikes' use 'there are' not 'there is'. Suggestion: use 'there are' with plural nouns: 'There are a lot of bikes.' You can also say 'Bicycles are very popular in my country.'