自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 発音と語彙の誤りを直し、より自然で簡潔な構造にする必要があります。まず「I hover」は誤りで「I did」や「I did have a bike」と言うべきです。回答はトピック文で直接答えた後、簡潔な詳細（いつ、どのように、どのくらい頻繁に）を1〜2文で付け加えると良いです。また、言い淀みや不要語を避け、語順と時制を正しく使ってください。例えば過去習慣を話す場合は過去形やused toを使うと自然です。

範例: Yes, I did. I used to ride my bike to school every day when I was a child. It took me about ten minutes and I usually rode with my friends, which made the journey fun.

建議: 流暢さはある程度ありますが、言い淀み（uh）が多く、語順や表現を改善するとより自然になります。一般論を述べた後で具体例や原因を明確に示すと効果的です。語彙は十分使えますが、不必要な繰り返し（in a city, parking is parking）を避け、代わりに理由を明確な表現でつなげる接続語（because, since, thereforeなど）を使ってください。

範例: Yes, I believe so. Many people, especially in cities, own bicycles because parking and petrol are expensive, and cycling is often quicker for short trips. As a result, bikes are a common and practical choice for daily commuting.

× Yes, I hover. Back when I was a child, every day I went to school by bike.

✓ Yes, I did. Back when I was a child, I rode my bike to school every day.

The original sentence uses 'hover', which is the wrong verb and makes the sentence incorrect in context. This is a word choice/verb error and also involves sentence structure. Use 'did' in response to 'Did you have a bike...' and use 'rode' (past tense of 'ride') to describe habitual past action. Also move 'every day' to the end or after the verb phrase for natural word order: 'I rode my bike to school every day.' Suggestion: Answer short questions with 'Yes, I did.' for past possession questions; use the past tense verb 'rode' for actions that happened regularly in the past.

× Yes, I think so. Most of the people have a bicycle, especially in the city, uh, because in a city parking is uh, parking cost a lot.

✓ Yes, I think so. Most people have a bicycle, especially in cities, because parking in a city costs a lot.

Problems: 'Most of the people' is unnatural here; 'most people' is preferred. 'Have a bicycle' is acceptable but 'have bicycles' or 'own a bicycle' could also work depending on meaning (singular/plural); here 'most people have a bicycle' is fine. The clause 'in a city parking is uh, parking cost a lot' is ungrammatical. Use 'parking in a city costs a lot' or 'parking is expensive in cities.' Also subject-verb agreement: 'parking ... costs' not 'cost'. Suggestions: Use 'most people' instead of 'most of the people' for general statements; use 'cities' (plural) or 'a city' consistently; use 'costs' to match singular subject 'parking.' Replace filler 'uh' when possible.