自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve grammar (past tense, subject-verb agreement), use a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and limit response to max 4-5 sentences. Add linking words to make it coherent and include one specific detail (e.g., age or reason).

範例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents were very strict. They preferred I learned to walk and use public transport first, so they didn't buy me a regular bicycle. Instead, when I was about eight, they gave me a small black balance bike to practice on.

建議: Begin with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, use linking words and provide a specific reason or example (e.g., commuting, cost, or local culture). Correct grammar and pluralization.

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are an affordable and convenient way to get around. For example, many students and workers commute short distances by bicycle, especially in smaller towns where traffic and parking are limited.

× No, I do not have bike.

✓ No, I did not have a bike.

The question asks about the past (when you were a child), so the verb should be in the past tense. Also, English requires an article before the singular countable noun 'bike' ('a bike'). Suggestion: use past simple 'did not have' and include the article 'a'.

× Why when I am child?

✓ Why when I was a child?

The sentence refers to a past time ('when I was a child'), so the pronoun 'I' should be used with past tense 'was'. The original also omits the article 'a' before 'child'. Suggestion: use 'when I was a child' for past reference.

× Because my parents is very strict, that's why they do not give me a bike.

✓ Because my parents were very strict, they did not give me a bike.

'Parents' is plural and requires a plural verb ('were' in past simple). The situation is in the past, so use past tense 'were' and 'did not give'. Also remove redundant 'that's why' if you keep sentence concise. Suggestion: match plural subject with plural verb and keep past tense consistent.

× They give me bike cycle which is in black colour.

✓ They gave me a bicycle that was black.

Several issues: 'give' should be past 'gave' to match past context; 'bike cycle' is redundant—use 'bicycle' or 'bike'; singular countable noun needs an article ('a'); 'which is in black colour' is unidiomatic—use 'that was black' or 'black' after the noun. Suggestion: use 'They gave me a bicycle that was black.'

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in our country because every boys have bikes.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in our country because every boy has a bike.

The phrase 'every boys' is incorrect: 'every' requires a singular noun ('every boy'). With a singular subject, use the third person singular verb 'has'. Also prefer singular 'a bike' after 'every boy'. Suggestion: use 'every boy has a bike.'

× That's why bikes are popular in our country.

✓ That is why bikes are popular in our country.

The sentence is grammatically acceptable but avoid repetition of previous idea; replace contraction 'That's' with 'That is' in formal responses if desired. Also ensure logical connection: the corrected prior sentence explains the reason, so this sentence can be kept or omitted for conciseness.