自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more accurate in tense and grammar, use a clear topic sentence, and give one or two concise supporting details with linking words. Avoid fragments and unnecessary words. For example, start with past tense (“I had…”), describe the bike type and color, and add a brief memory or reason why you liked it. Keep it to 2–4 sentences.

範例: I had a bike when I was a child. It was a large orange mountain bike with wide tires, which made it easy to ride on rough paths. I remember loving it because it was sturdy and let me explore the neighborhood.

建議: Use a clear topic sentence and correct grammar; link reasons with connectors and provide a specific example or statistic if possible. Correct common errors (use ‘bicycles’, ‘because petrol is expensive’). Keep answers natural and concise, 2–3 sentences maximum.

範例: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country because petrol prices are high, so many people choose cycling to save money. For example, I see more commuters riding bikes to work, especially in urban areas where traffic is bad.

× Yes, I have a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

The question asks about possession in the past ('Did you have... when you were a child?'), so the response should use the past tense. Use 'had' instead of 'have' to match the past-time reference. Suggestion: Use past simple for completed past situations (I had a bike).

× It's a big bike, like mountain bike.

✓ It was a big bike, like a mountain bike.

Two issues: tense and missing article. The examiner's question refers to childhood, so use past tense 'was'. Also, 'mountain bike' needs an article 'a' when used in this comparative phrase. Suggestion: Say 'It was a big bike, like a mountain bike.'

× It's a rear bike with the color orange and.

✓ It was a rear bike that was orange.

Sentence is incomplete and mismatches tense. Use past tense 'was' and complete the clause; 'rear bike' is unusual but acceptable if intended (meaning a bike with rear features). The phrase 'with the color orange and' is incomplete; replace with 'that was orange' or 'with an orange color.' Suggestion: 'It was a rear bike that was orange.'

× Yes, many people base like bicycle in my country because it has the gasoline is more.

✓ Yes, many people ride bicycles in my country because gasoline is more expensive.

Multiple errors: 'base like' is incorrect verb choice; use 'ride'. 'Bicycle' should be plural 'bicycles' when referring to many people. The clause 'because it has the gasoline is more' is ungrammatical; express comparison as 'because gasoline is more expensive.' Suggestion: 'Many people ride bicycles because gasoline is more expensive.'

× Higher, higher prices and bike is easy to ride.

✓ Prices are higher, and bikes are easy to ride.

The original has fragmented phrases and wrong agreement. Use a complete sentence: 'Prices are higher' (subject 'prices' with plural verb 'are') and 'bikes are easy to ride' (plural subject with plural verb). Also combine with 'and' to connect reasons. Suggestion: 'Prices are higher, and bikes are easy to ride.'