自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cải thiện ngữ pháp thì quá khứ (use past tense), làm câu rõ ràng hơn với một câu chủ đề rồi bổ sung chi tiết ngắn gọn; loại bỏ tiếng tạm (umm, uh) và hoàn thành câu tránh để đoạn trả lời dang dở. Nên dùng liên từ đơn giản để nối ý (for example, and, also) và giữ tối đa 3–4 câu.

範例: Yes, I did. When I was a child I had a small tricycle that was bright red and very cute. I used to ride it around my neighborhood every afternoon with my friends, and it was my favorite toy because it made me feel independent.

建議: Trả lời nên bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, dùng thì và cấu trúc đúng, tránh lặp từ và tiếng tạm; cung cấp lý do cụ thể hơn và có thể so sánh với các phương tiện khác. Sử dụng liên từ (because, therefore, however) để làm câu mạch lạc và giới hạn 2–3 câu ngắn gọn.

範例: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country because many people prefer motorcycles and cars. Bikes are slower and less comfortable for long distances, so they are mainly used for short trips or by children and hobbyists.

× Absolutely yes umm, and when I was young, I have a small, I have a tricycle, uh and is really small and cute. Also I.

✓ Absolutely yes. When I was young, I had a small tricycle, and it was really small and cute.

The original uses present tense 'have' and 'is' while describing a past situation ('when I was young'); English requires past tense verbs. Change 'have' to 'had' and 'is' to 'was'. Also add the subject 'it' for 'was'. Suggestions: consistently use past tense for past events, include clear subjects, and split run-on fragments into complete sentences. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× Umm, I don't think so, because bike is really small and is speed is really slow, Uh, so that uh, can be unconvenience for people to go, uh, someplace.

✓ Umm, I don't think so, because bikes are generally small and their speed is really slow, so they can be inconvenient for people to go someplace.

Several article and noun-number issues: 'bike' should be plural 'bikes' when speaking generally; 'is speed' is ungrammatical—use 'their speed' and plural agreement. 'Can be unconvenience' misuses noun instead of adjective; use 'inconvenient'. Also maintain plural subject-verb agreement: 'bikes are'. Suggestions: use plural for general statements, use possessive adjective 'their' for speed, and use the adjective 'inconvenient' rather than the noun 'unconvenience'. Grammar problem type ID: 1