自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu, trả lời trực tiếp hơn và thêm chi tiết cụ thể. Tránh trả lời lặp và dùng từ không phù hợp (ví dụ “bag” thay vì “bike”). Nên mở đầu bằng một câu chủ đề, sau đó dùng 1–2 câu bổ sung có liên kết rõ ràng (ví dụ: because/so/when).

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I started learning to ride it at the age of two with my father's help, and it was a small pink bike with training wheels. I remember practicing in our yard until I felt confident to ride on the street.

建議: Cải thiện phát âm từ và lựa chọn từ vựng chính xác; sửa ngữ pháp (thì và động từ). Trả lời rõ ràng: đưa ra ý kiến trực tiếp, sau đó giải thích vì sao, kèm ví dụ cụ thể hoặc so sánh. Dùng liên từ như 'because' hoặc 'for example' để mạch lạc.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many students use bicycles to get to school because they are cheap and convenient, and in some cities cycling is a common way to avoid traffic.

× This I had to go back when I was 2.

✓ If I go back to when I was 2, I didn't have a bike.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and unclear meaning. It mixes 'This I had to go back' which is ungrammatical. Suggest rephrasing to a clear conditional or past statement: 'If I go back to when I was 2' or 'When I was 2, I didn't have a bike.' Use proper subject-verb order and clear temporal phrase placement.

× It's a pink bag I used to learn to ride a bike with my father.

✓ It was a pink balance bike I used to learn to ride with my father.

The original uses 'a pink bag' which is likely a wrong noun and conflicts with context. Also 'It's' (present) mismatches past event; use past tense 'It was'. Replace 'bag' with the appropriate noun 'balance bike' (or 'bike') and remove redundant 'a bike' after 'ride'. Ensure article use matches noun.

× Very good.

✓ I had a lot of fun learning with him.

'Very good' is a fragment and does not answer the question about having a bike; it's not a complete sentence in this context. Provide a full sentence that describes the experience. Use subject and verb to form a complete thought.

× This I think by are very popular in my country.

✓ I think bikes are very popular in my country.

The original has incorrect word order and extraneous words ('This', 'by', 'are'). Correct sentence should follow subject-verb-complement order: 'I think bikes are very popular in my country.' Remove unnecessary words.

× Everyone used to have a bite when they high school.

✓ Everyone used to have a bike when they were in high school.

The original contains a wrong word 'bite' instead of 'bike' and omits the verb for 'high school'. Use past continuous structure 'were in high school' or simple past 'in high school' to indicate past time. Also keep 'used to' to show habitual past action.