自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Give a fuller, natural response: start with a clear topic sentence and add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid one-word answers. Keep it under five sentences.

範例: Yes, I did. I had a red bicycle that my father gave me when I was eight, and I used it to ride to the park every weekend. Because it was lightweight and easy to handle, I learned to ride confidently within a few days.

建議: Make the answer more natural and coherent: begin with a clear statement, then expand with reasons and a brief example using linking words (e.g., however, because). Fix grammar (singular/plural) and avoid redundancy.

範例: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country. However, there are few dedicated bike lanes, so many cyclists have to share busy roads with cars, which makes riding less safe for commuters.

× Yes, I had.

✓ Yes, I did.

The examiner asked a yes/no question in the past tense: 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' The correct short affirmative response uses the auxiliary 'did' (did/do) rather than repeating the main verb in past tense. Saying 'Yes, I had' is not standard for this type of question. Use 'Yes, I did.' to agree with a past-tense question. Suggestion: For past simple yes/no questions formed with did, reply with 'Yes, I did' or 'No, I didn't.'

× Yes, of course it's very popular, but we don't have a road specifically for bikes.

✓ Yes, of course they are very popular, but we don't have roads specifically for bikes.

The question asked about 'bikes' (plural). The student used 'it's' (it is), which mismatches number with the plural subject. Also 'a road' implies a single road for all bikes; plural 'roads' better reflects the general lack of bicycle lanes or infrastructure. Correction: use plural pronoun and plural noun: 'they are' and 'roads'. Suggestion: Match pronouns and verbs to the number of the noun (bikes -> they are). Use plural nouns when speaking generally about availability (roads instead of a road) or specify 'a road' only if referring to one particular road.