自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then add 1–2 supporting details using correct tense and linking words. Correct grammar (e.g., use past tense consistently: 'I liked' or 'I used to ride'), avoid redundant phrases ('bike ride a bike'), and ensure relevance (omit unrelated details like 'disco' unless explained). Use linking words such as 'also' or 'one time' to connect ideas.

範例: Yes, I did. I used to ride my bike almost every afternoon around the park near my home. Also, my sister and I often raced each other, which made those afternoons fun and memorable.

建議: Answer directly and give specific reasons with correct grammar and linking words. Begin with a clear opinion ('I don't think they are very popular'). Use correct structures ('my city doesn’t have bike lanes') and give a specific example or comparison. Avoid unclear words ('Felicity') and be precise about who or what you mean. Use linking words like 'because', 'however', and 'for example'.

範例: I don’t think bicycles are very popular in my city because the local government has not built dedicated bike lanes. As a result, many people prefer cars or public transport for safety reasons. However, in some developed cities, governments invest in cycling infrastructure, which encourages more people to ride bikes.

× Yes, of course I like to bike ride a bike.

✓ Yes, of course I liked to ride a bike.

The question asks about having a bike when you were a child, so the past tense should be used. 'Like' is present tense; change to 'liked' to match 'when I was a child'. Also 'bike ride a bike' is redundant; use 'ride a bike'. Suggestion: use past simple for habitual past actions (I liked to ride / I used to ride).

× When I was high, I usually ride a bike around the park.

✓ When I was young, I usually rode a bike around the park.

'When I was high' is likely a word choice error; use 'young'. The main grammar error is verb tense: 'usually ride' is present tense but the time frame is past, so use past simple 'rode'. For habitual past actions, 'usually' + past simple is correct. Alternatively use 'used to ride'.

× After the disco I played with my sister.

✓ After the disco I played with my sister.

The sentence is already in correct past tense and fits the context, so no grammatical change is necessary. It correctly describes a past action after an event. (No change required.)

× It was a memorable experience for me.

✓ It was a memorable experience for me.

This sentence correctly uses past tense and is grammatically correct, so no change is needed. It properly describes a past memory.

× From my own experience, buying is not popular in my country because my city haven't supported the bike lane in the road.

✓ From my own experience, buying bicycles is not popular in my country because my city hasn't supported bike lanes on the roads.

Multiple issues: 'buying' alone is a gerund needing an object—use 'buying bicycles' or 'buying bikes'. Subject-verb agreement: 'my city haven't' should be 'my city hasn't' (singular subject with auxiliary has). 'the bike lane in the road' is awkward; use plural 'bike lanes' and 'on the roads' or 'along the roads'. The sentence uses past/present mix; 'hasn't supported' (present perfect) is appropriate to indicate ongoing lack of support. Suggestion: use clear noun for 'buying bicycles', correct verb agreement, and correct prepositions for lanes on roads.

× In some developed countries that the government provide bike land which is Felicity.

✓ In some developed countries the government provides bike lanes, which is beneficial.

The original has several problems: unnecessary 'that' after 'countries' and incorrect clause structure. Use a simple relative clause or separate clause: 'In some developed countries the government provides...'. Subject-verb agreement: 'government provide' should be 'government provides'. 'bike land' is incorrect word choice—use 'bike lanes'. 'which is Felicity' is wrong; likely intended 'which is beneficial' or 'which is a good thing'. Also use proper comma before the nonrestrictive clause. Suggestion: simplify structure, correct verb agreement, and use appropriate vocabulary.