自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more natural and grammatically correct: respond directly with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using correct verb forms and linking words. Avoid redundancy and unnecessary filler words (e.g., "and that time", "Yeah").

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that I often rode in the fields near my house. For example, I would ride with my friends every afternoon and sometimes practice tricks in our yard, which helped me become more confident on the bike.

建議: Make your answer clearer and more precise: start with a direct opinion, then give specific reasons and examples. Use correct verbs and vocabulary (e.g., "ride" not "write"). Use linking words like "because" or "for example" to connect ideas and reduce hesitation fillers ("uh").

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient. For example, many delivery services such as Foodpanda use motorcycles, and people often ride bikes to work or to run small errands in crowded cities.

× And that time when I was a child, I used to biking with it on the field and sometimes at house as well.

✓ At that time when I was a child, I used to ride it in the field and sometimes at home as well.

The phrase 'used to' should be followed by the base form of the verb, not the -ing form. 'Biking' is a gerund/participle, but after 'used to' we need the infinitive without 'to' (base verb), so 'used to ride' is correct. Also 'at house' is incorrect preposition and article use; use 'at home' or 'at the house'. I changed 'on the field' to 'in the field' for more natural preposition use. Suggestion: use 'used to' + base verb for habitual past actions and use 'at home' for location.'

× Yes, most of the people do write whenever they wanted to go somewhere and also uh like patha foodpanda, this kind of service people usually use uh bike to reach the places of course.

✓ Yes, most people ride bikes when they want to go somewhere, and delivery services like Pathao and Foodpanda usually use bikes to reach places.

Multiple tense and vocabulary problems: 'do write' is incorrect—likely the intended verb is 'ride'. Use present simple for general facts: 'most people ride' and 'when they want' (not 'wanted'). 'This kind of service' is awkward; specify 'delivery services like Pathao and Foodpanda'. 'Use uh bike' should be 'use bikes' (plural) to match 'services' and general statement. Also clean up filler words. Suggestion: use present simple for habitual/general truths, choose correct verbs (ride), and match singular/plural forms for nouns.'