自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Use correct past tense and a clear topic sentence, then add one or two brief supporting details if needed. For example, say you didn’t have a bike and explain why or what you used instead. Keep it natural and under five sentences.

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family couldn’t afford one at the time, so I usually walked to school or took the bus. Occasionally I borrowed a neighbor’s bike for short rides.

建議: Begin with a clear topic sentence and then give specific reasons or examples using linking words (for example, because, so, therefore). Avoid repetition and finish your thought. Aim for 2–4 sentences total.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in the Philippines. For example, many people use bicycles for short trips and commuting because they are cheap and convenient in crowded areas. As a result, you often see bike lanes and markets full of cyclists in cities.

× When I was a child, I have no bike.

✓ When I was a child, I had no bike.

This sentence mixes past time reference 'When I was a child' with a present tense verb 'have'. Use past tense 'had' to match the time frame. Suggestion: Use consistent tense by matching verbs to time indicators (e.g., 'when I was', use past simple verbs).

× I am living here in the Philippines and I think that most people here are using bikes especially when they want to go outside or just.

✓ I live here in the Philippines, and I think that most people here use bikes, especially when they want to go out or just for short trips.

The progressive present 'am living' is acceptable for temporary situations but simple present 'live' is more natural for a general statement. 'Are using' should be simple present 'use' for habitual actions. 'Go outside' is acceptable but 'go out' is more idiomatic; the final fragment 'or just' is incomplete so complete it as 'or just for short trips.' Suggestions: Use simple present for habitual actions, avoid unnecessary progressive, and complete fragments to finish the thought.