自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and fix tense/word choice errors (e.g., "couldn't ride," "my dad told me to use a bicycle instead," "safer").

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike as a child. My parents thought it was unsafe because I hadn’t learned to ride properly, so my dad told me to use a small bicycle with training wheels instead.

建議: Answer directly, then add one or two specific reasons with linking words. Correct pronunciation/word choice errors ("bike" not "bite") and tense consistency. Use linking words like "especially" or "because" to connect ideas and be more precise (e.g., who uses them, where).

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Especially during morning rush hour, many commuters use bicycles because they are cheap and often faster than cars in congested areas.

× No, I did not, because during that time I could not ride the the bike, you know, because it was not safe for me and my dad told me that just used a bicycle instead is more safe.

✓ No, I did not, because at that time I could not ride the bike, and it was not safe for me, and my dad told me to use a bicycle instead because it was safer.

Errors: incorrect time expression ('during that time' -> 'at that time'), duplicate word ('the the'), tense/structure in the reported advice ('my dad told me that just used a bicycle instead is more safe' is ungrammatical). Use 'told me to use' for reported command/suggestion. Use 'safer' (comparative adjective) not 'more safe'. Combine clauses with 'and' for clarity. Keep past tense consistent: 'could not', 'was not', 'told me'. Suggestion: Use consistent past tense forms, correct comparative adjective 'safer', remove duplicate words, and use 'told me to + base verb' for reported instructions.

× Basically they are I I've seen a lot of bite on the road, especially when I had when I have to travel to the to the city in the morning in the rush hour.

✓ Basically, they are. I have seen a lot of bikes on the road, especially when I have to travel to the city in the morning during rush hour.

Errors: sentence run-on and mixed tenses ('I've seen' vs 'when I had when I have to travel'). Incorrect word 'bite' should be 'bikes'. Duplicate 'to the' and awkward time phrase. Use present perfect 'I have seen' to indicate experience and present simple 'when I have to travel' to express habitual action. 'During rush hour' is the correct prepositional phrase. Suggestion: Fix word choice ('bikes'), remove duplicates, separate clauses into clear sentences or use punctuation, and keep tense consistent for habitual vs experiential actions.

× There are plenty of bikes there.

✓ There are plenty of bikes there.

This sentence is actually correct grammatically. Plural 'bikes' matches 'plenty of'. No change needed. Included here to indicate that the plural usage is correct.