自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Give a direct, complete response and add brief supporting detail. Use a full sentence, mention whether you had one and, if not, explain why or describe an alternative (e.g., walked, used public transport, borrowed from friends). Keep it natural and concise (1–3 sentences).

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family couldn’t afford one, so I usually walked to school or took the bus instead.

建議: Start with a clear topic sentence, then give specific supporting details and a linking phrase to make it coherent. Avoid grammar mistakes (use correct verb forms and word order) and finish the sentence. Keep to 2–3 sentences and include examples or reasons (commuting, exercise, affordability).

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them to commute to work and school. For example, I often see crowded bike lanes during rush hour, and many students ride bikes because they are cheap and convenient.

× Not yet.

✓ Not yet, I didn't.

The student's reply 'Not yet.' is a fragment that doesn't clearly respond to the past-tense question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?'. The expected form is a short past-tense response like 'No, I didn't' or 'Not yet, I didn't'. Suggestion: Use a complete short answer that matches the auxiliary 'did' in the question (e.g., 'No, I didn't' or 'Not yet').

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in our country because I see other people how to use bike and.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because I see other people riding bikes.

Multiple issues: 'our country' is odd when the speaker is answering personally; use 'my country'. The clause 'I see other people how to use bike and' is ungrammatical. To describe observing people using bicycles, use the verb 'ride' and plural 'bikes'. Also remove the trailing 'and'. Suggestion: Use 'I see other people riding bikes' or 'many people ride bikes' to make a clear, grammatical reason.