自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答不是直接回答问题，而且包含重复或纠正考官的话，显得不自然且没有提供信息。回答应直接给出主题句，然后在需要时用简短细节扩展，控制在最多5句话内，并使用连词让表达连贯。建议先直接“Yes/No”或简短说明，然后补充一两条具体细节（例如何时得到、如何使用、感受）。

範例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was eight and I used it to ride to my friend’s house every weekend. It helped me become more independent and I remember practicing in the park until I felt confident.

建議: 回答直接且相关，但略显简短且缺乏具体细节和连词。可以在主题句后用连词（for example/for instance/because）补充具体数据、场景或比较，使观点更有说服力。保持自然口语，用词准确且避免重复。

範例: Yes, I think bikes are very popular, especially in cities, because many people use them to commute to work. For example, in my city there are dedicated bike lanes and a lot of office workers cycle during rush hour to avoid traffic and save money.

× Did you have a bike where you were a child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

学生把疑问句中的时间连接词写成 where（地点），但原问题是询问“在你小时候”，应该用 when（时间）。建议记住常见时间词（when, while, in, on）与地点词（where）的区别，写含时间从句时用 when。

× Yes because many people use bikes as transportation for work.

✓ Yes, because many people use bikes as transportation for work.

句子本身时态正确（一般现在时），问题是缺少逗号和连贯性。为提高书面和口头表达，应在 because 前或后根据语气加入逗号分隔，从而使句子更清晰。此外可改写为更自然的表达，例如："Yes, many people use bikes to get to work." 建议练习一般现在时的陈述句和连接词的使用。