自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be grammatically correct, clear and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence that matches tense (e.g., "Yes, I did"). Then add one or two brief supporting details (where you rode it, who you rode with, or a short memory). Use linking words if adding details (for example, "when" or "because"). Keep answers under five sentences.

範例: Yes, I did. I had a red bicycle that I rode around my neighborhood when I was about eight. I often rode it with my friends after school, and it helped me feel independent.

建議: Answer directly, then explain with clear, specific reasons and proper linking words. Use correct vocabulary and grammar (e.g., "bicycles" or "bikes", "teenagers", "middle-aged workers"). Give two concise supporting points and an example or brief comparison. Avoid filler words and unclear phrases.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Firstly, many people use bicycles for short commutes because they are cheap and convenient. Secondly, teenagers often cycle for leisure, while some middle-aged workers use bikes to avoid traffic. For example, in my city there are dedicated bike lanes that make cycling safer.

× Yes, I have a bike when I'm shy.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The examiner's question asks about the past (when you were a child), so the student should use past tense. 'Have' is present tense; 'had' is past. Also 'I'm shy' is incorrect in context and irrelevant; the intended phrase is 'I was a child.' Use past simple for completed past situations: 'I had a bike when I was a child.'

× Of course by is popular in my country because a lot of the range of the is like uh, shine.

✓ Of course bikes are popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and they are convenient.

This sentence has multiple problems: 'by' is a misspelling of 'bikes', 'is' with singular verb conflicts with plural subject, and the phrase 'a lot of the range of the is like uh, shine' is ungrammatical and unclear. Correct the subject to 'bikes' (plural) and use proper plural verb agreement 'are'. Replace unclear phrase with a clear reason such as 'many people use them for short trips and they are convenient.' Avoid filler words and ensure subject-verb agreement and logical sentence structure.

× Also teenage they still use bike and some of the worker in the middle age they also use bike.

✓ Also teenagers still use bikes, and some middle-aged workers also use bikes.

Several pronoun and noun-form errors: 'teenage' should be the plural noun 'teenagers'; 'they' after 'teenage' is redundant if you pluralize correctly but can be kept for emphasis. 'Worker in the middle age' should be 'middle-aged workers' (hyphenated adjective + plural noun). Use plural 'bikes' to match plural subjects. Ensure consistent plural forms and correct adjective-noun order: 'middle-aged workers.'