自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear and directly addresses the question with a concise reason, which is good. To improve, make the response slightly more natural and add one brief supporting detail using a linking word to show contrast or consequence. Also avoid the minor awkwardness of 'the fear of traffic' by using a more natural phrase such as 'I was afraid of traffic' or 'traffic was scary.' Keep the answer within 3–4 sentences.

範例: Yes, I did have a bike, but I rarely used it because I was afraid of busy traffic. As a result, I usually walked or took the bus to school while my friends cycled.

建議: Your answer is relevant and gives a clear reason. To improve, finish the sentence fully, add one more specific detail or example, and use a linking word to connect ideas smoothly (for example, 'for example' or 'because'). Avoid repetition ('use bikes instead of cars' and then 'to go to grocery stores'); be specific about distances or typical users. Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in Japan. For example, in cities like Tokyo many people, especially students and office workers, rely on bicycles for short trips to grocery stores or train stations because parking and traffic are difficult.

× Yes, I did, but I hardly used it because of the fear of traffic.

✓ Yes, I did, but I hardly used it because I was afraid of traffic.

The phrase 'because of the fear of traffic' is grammatically awkward and not the natural way to express personal emotion. Use the idiomatic expression 'I was afraid of traffic' which uses an adjective (afraid) with the preposition 'of' to show what caused the fear. This corrects prepositional and expression use and improves clarity.

× Yes, they are very popular in my country Japan.

✓ Yes, they are very popular in my country, Japan.

A comma is needed before an appositive (Japan) that renames 'my country'. This is punctuation rather than an article word, but under the provided list the closest issue is 'Article errors' because the noun phrase lacks correct delimitation. Add a comma to separate the appositive for grammatical correctness and natural flow.

× Especially in cities like Tokyo, many people don't have their own cars, so they use bikes instead of cars to go to grocery stores or

✓ Especially in cities like Tokyo, many people don't have their own cars, so they use bikes to go to grocery stores or to work.

The original sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly with 'or'. This is a sentence structure problem. Complete the parallel structure after 'or' by providing another complement (for example 'to work') and remove the redundant phrase 'instead of cars' because 'don't have their own cars' already implies that. Maintain parallelism: 'to go to grocery stores or to work.'