自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答没有回答考官的问题，而且使用了错误的句式。建议：直接回答问题，用一个主题句说明是否有自行车，然后补充一到两句具体细节（例如什么时候得到的、经常骑去哪里、和谁一起骑）。注意语法和句型的正确性，避免把考官的问题重复成疑问句。

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it as a birthday present when I was eight and I used to ride it to my friend’s house every afternoon. It was a simple red bicycle with a small basket.

建議: 你的回答表达了观点，但有语法错误和用词不当，且缺乏连贯的细节。建议：用一到两句直接陈述观点，然后用连接词（例如 because, for example, so）提供具体原因或例子，注意主谓一致和动词形式。尽量把回答控制在最多五句话内。

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, I often see people riding bikes in parks and on dedicated bike lanes after work.

× Did you have a bike where you were a child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

原句使用了错误的介词“where”。此处想询问“在你小时候”（表示时间），正确的介词应为“when”。建议记住：表示时间用 when，表示地点用 where。

× Yes, in my eye face there are many people ride riding bikes after work

✓ Yes, in my view there are many people who ride bikes after work.

句中多个问题： 1) “in my eye face” 是错误短语，意图为“在我看来/我认为”，应使用短语“in my view”或“in my opinion”。 2) 缺少关系代词“who”连接主句和定语从句，正确为“people who ride bikes”。 3) 动词形式错误：不应同时用原形和 -ing（“ride riding”），在此句中描述习惯性动作用一般现在时“ride”。 综合以上，修改为“in my view there are many people who ride bikes after work.” 建议：学习常用表达“in my opinion/view”，使用关系代词连接人和后续动词，并根据习惯或常态使用一般现在时。