自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cải thiện ngữ pháp và lưu loát: tránh lỗi thì và cấu trúc (“used to ride” thay vì “used to riding”, “know how to ride” thay vì “know ride”), loại bỏ tiếng lấp đầy (“uh”, “umm”) để tăng tính tự nhiên; sắp xếp câu theo cấu trúc rõ ràng: câu chủ đề + 1–2 chi tiết bổ sung. Ngoài ra rút ngắn câu để không quá dài (tối đa 5 câu).

範例: Yes, I did. I learned to ride a bike when I was very young because my parents taught me. I used to ride regularly around my neighborhood, so I still feel comfortable and confident cycling now.

建議: Cải thiện rõ ràng và cụ thể nội dung: trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng lý do cụ thể và tránh lặp từ; sửa ngữ pháp và trật tự từ (“bikes are popular because they are affordable and convenient for short trips”); dùng từ liên kết như “because” hoặc “for example” để làm rõ lý do. Tránh lặp “primary school”.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular. They are affordable and convenient for short trips, especially for children going to primary school. For example, many parents let their kids cycle to school or to nearby shops.

× Since I was a little kid, I used to riding a bike umm, my parents uh, taught me uh, and until now I uh, I feel very comfortable and confident because I uh know uh ride a bike.

✓ Since I was a little kid, I used to ride a bike. My parents taught me, and even now I feel very comfortable and confident because I know how to ride a bike.

Error type: misuse of 'used to' + verb. After 'used to' we must use the base form of the verb, not the -ing form. Also missing 'how to' before 'ride a bike' to express ability. Suggestions: replace 'used to riding' with 'used to ride' and add 'how to' before 'ride a bike'. Note: Keep sentences clear and split run-on speech into shorter sentences to improve clarity.

× Yes absolutely a bike is very popular in my country because suit it is suitable for children who learn a primary school primary school.

✓ Yes, absolutely. Bikes are very popular in my country because they are suitable for children who attend primary school.

Error type: incorrect article and number usage. The speaker used 'a bike' while speaking generally about the category; use plural 'Bikes' or 'A bike is' with different structure. Also 'suit it is suitable' is redundant and ungrammatical; 'they are suitable' correctly refers to bikes. 'Learn a primary school' is incorrect—use 'attend primary school' or 'are in primary school'. Suggestions: use plural when speaking generally ('Bikes are') and correct the verb and pronoun agreement ('they are suitable'), and use 'attend primary school' to express school attendance.