自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Perbaikan: Perbaiki tata bahasa dasar (waktu lampau) dan pastikan jawaban langsung serta natural. Gunakan satu kalimat topik yang jelas lalu tambahan singkat jika perlu. Contoh fokus: gunakan past simple untuk menyatakan kepemilikan di masa lalu dan hindari kesalahan kata kerja bantu. Juga usahakan tidak lebih dari 2–3 kalimat.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small blue bicycle that I used to ride around my neighborhood after school.

建議: Perbaikan: Sederhanakan struktur kalimat dan perbaiki tata bahasa (agreement dan plural). Gunakan linking words singkat untuk keterkaitan (for example, because, so). Tambahkan detail spesifik (statistik sederhana, area atau waktu tertentu) untuk memperkuat jawaban. Batasi panjang jawaban hingga maksimal 4–5 kalimat.

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap and practical for short trips. For example, many students and delivery drivers ride bicycles in city centers during the day, so I often see crowded bike lanes near schools and markets.

× Yes, I have a bike when I'm was kid.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a kid.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses: 'have' is present while the context is past ('when I was a child'). Also 'I'm was kid' is ungrammatical; it seems to combine 'I am' and 'was'. The correct form uses the past tense 'had' and the past-clause 'when I was a kid'. Suggestion: Keep the whole sentence in past tense for consistency: 'I had a bike when I was a kid.'

× For example, student and deliveries driver often ride bikes in the cities, so that's why I see many bikes on the street every day.

✓ For example, students and delivery drivers often ride bikes in the city, so that's why I see many bikes on the street every day.

There are pluralization errors: 'student' should be plural 'students' to match 'often ride'. 'deliveries driver' is wrong; use the noun 'delivery' to modify 'drivers' and make it plural: 'delivery drivers'. Also 'in the cities' is unnatural here; if referring generally to urban areas or the city where the speaker lives, use 'in the city' or 'in cities'. Suggestion: Use consistent plural forms for people performing the action and choose the singular collective 'the city' or plural 'cities' depending on meaning.