自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cevabınız soruyu doğrudan yanıtlamıyor ve gramer hatası içeriyor. Öncelikle net bir konu cümlesiyle başlayın (ör. "Yes, I did" veya "No, I didn't"). Ardından 1-2 destekleyici cümle ekleyin: bisikleti kimle kullandığınız, ne sıklıkla sürdüğünüz veya unutulmaz bir anınızı kısaça belirtin. Bağlaçlar (for example, because, so) kullanarak ifadeyi akıcı hale getirin. Cümle sayısını 3-4'te tutun ve doğal kelimeler tercih edin.

範例: Yes, I did. I had a red bicycle that my parents bought me when I was seven, and I rode it almost every day after school. For example, I often rode with my neighbor to the park, which helped me gain confidence and enjoy outdoor activities.

建議: Cevabınız hem yanlış kelime ("spikes" yerine "bikes") kullanıyor hem de gerekçe veya örnek içermiyor. Önce doğru kelimeyle doğrudan yanıt verin (Yes/No). Sonra popülerlik seviyesini destekleyecek sebepler veya karşılaştırmalar ekleyin (ör. ulaşım alternatifleri, altyapı, iklim). Bağlaçlar (because, however, although) kullanarak mantıklı bağlantılar kurun ve 2-3 cümlede kalın.

範例: No, I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country because many people prefer cars and public transport. However, cycling is becoming more common in some cities where the local government has built bike lanes.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child

✓ Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child.

The student's reply repeats the examiner's question without proper sentence structure for an answer. In English, short answers to past questions typically use 'Yes/No' plus the auxiliary verb: 'Yes, I did' or 'No, I didn't.' The original lacks the auxiliary and is just a question form; correcting to 'Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child.' provides a proper affirmative past response. Suggestion: Answer past tense questions with 'Yes/No' followed by the auxiliary (did/didn't) and the subject, then the main verb if needed. Grammar problem type ID:26

× No, I don't think spikes are popular in my country.

✓ No, I don't think bikes are popular in my country.

The student used 'spikes' instead of 'bikes,' which is a word choice error leading to a sentence that does not answer the examiner's question. The verb phrase 'I don't think' is present tense and appropriate for the question 'Do you think bikes are popular...'. Only the noun needed correction. Suggestion: Use the correct noun 'bikes' to match the topic; ensure vocabulary matches the question context. Grammar problem type ID:26