自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cevabınız açık ama çok kısa ve dolgu kelimeleri kullanılmış. Eksik olanlar: net bir konu cümlesi, bağlaçlarla desteklenmiş ek ayrıntılar ve özgün örnekler. Geliştirmek için: gereksiz “um” gibi dolgu kelimelerini kaldırın; konu cümlesiyle başlayıp, nerede ve kimlerle sürdüğünüzü, ne kadar süre kullandığınızı veya bu deneyimin size ne kattığını kısa destek cümleleriyle ekleyin. Cümle sayısını 3-4’te tutun ve akıcı bağlaçlar (for example, because, so, when) kullanın.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it around our small town with my friends after school, usually for about an hour each day. Riding a bike helped me stay active and explore nearby parks, so I remember it fondly.

建議: Cevabınız doğrudan ama daha ikna edici olmak için daha fazla spesifik detay ve bağlantı cümleleri ekleyin. Örneğin, hangi bölgelerde popüler olmadığını, alternatif ulaşım araçlarını veya hava/altyapı ile ilgili nedenleri belirtin. Ayrıca olumlu bir karşıörnek veya tahmin ekleyerek cevabı zenginleştirebilirsiniz. 2–4 cümle arasında kalın ve “however”, “for example” gibi bağlaçlar kullanın.

範例: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country because many roads are hilly and poorly maintained, which makes cycling difficult. For example, in rural areas there are few bike lanes and people prefer motorbikes or cars for convenience. However, cycling is becoming more common in some cities where new bike paths have been built.

× Yes, when I was a child, I had a bike and I was riding bike in our town um that's it.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I had a bike and I rode my bike around our town.

Error type: Verb + -ing form. The student used the past continuous 'was riding' unnecessarily for a habitual past action; simple past 'rode' is more appropriate for habitual or repeated actions. Also 'riding bike' is missing the article/possessive and should be 'rode my bike'. Suggestion: Use simple past for regular past habits (I rode my bike), and include the correct determiner (my/the) before 'bike'.

× I think no, because in our country roads are not that flat and it's hard to ride a bike.

✓ I don't think so, because in our country the roads are not that flat and it's hard to ride a bike.

Error type: Incorrect use of the definite article. The student omitted 'the' before 'roads' when referring to roads in the country in general; English typically uses 'the roads' in this context. Also 'I think no' is unnatural; use 'I don't think so'. Suggestion: Use 'I don't think so' for negative opinion and include 'the' before plural nouns when speaking about a specific set (the roads in our country).