自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be concise and directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Correct grammar and word order, avoid repetition, and limit to 3–4 sentences. Use linking words (because, so) to show reason. For example, say you saved money, how long it took, and why the bike mattered to you.

範例: Yes. I bought a bike when I was a child after saving pocket money for several months because I wanted to travel to school more easily. My mother and grandmother worked hard to support me, so owning a bike felt like an important reward and a way to be more independent.

建議: Start with a clear direct opinion (Yes/No/Partly) and then give specific reasons with correct grammar and linking words. Avoid unclear phrases and correct vocabulary (e.g., 'ridden', 'motorbike'). Limit to 3–4 sentences and add one example or comparison for clarity.

範例: I think bikes are not very popular among wealthier people in my country. Many families view bicycles as a practical option for children or low-income households, while wealthier people prefer motorbikes or cars because they are faster and more comfortable. For instance, in my town most teenagers who can afford it choose scooters instead of traditional bikes.

× When I was a child I saved my own money every single day to buy a bike for my own because I see my mom and my grandma work so hard just for me to study and to raise me for me from baby till.

✓ When I was a child, I saved my own money every single day to buy a bike for myself because I saw my mom and my grandma working so hard to support me and raise me from when I was a baby.

Errors: present tense used ('see') while describing past events; incorrect reflexive/pronoun usage ('for my own', 'for me') and awkward phrasing ('from baby till'). Suggestions: Use past simple ('saw') for finished past actions, replace 'for my own' with 'for myself', use 'working' (present participle) to describe continuous past action in context, and rephrase 'from when I was a baby' for clarity. Add commas for readability.

× Well, I don't think so because bike usually They radon by a poor kid but most rich kids that can afford a bicycle or motor bicycle, they prefer riding it rather than just

✓ Well, I don't think so because bikes are usually ridden by poor kids, but most rich kids who can afford a bicycle or motorbike prefer riding other vehicles.

Errors: incorrect singular/plural and verb form ('bike usually They radon'); incorrect verb choice and tense ('radon' is incorrect, should be 'ridden' passive); wrong pronoun/corporation ('that' -> 'who'); awkward noun 'motor bicycle' and sentence fragment at the end. Suggestions: Use plural 'bikes' with passive 'are usually ridden', use past participle 'ridden', replace 'that' with 'who' for people, use 'motorbike' or 'motorcycle', and complete the comparison 'prefer riding other vehicles' to finish the thought.