自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your response simply repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. For a better score, answer directly with a clear topic sentence (yes/no) and add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep it concise (no more than 5 sentences) and use natural vocabulary.

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bicycle that I learned to ride when I was seven, and I used to practice every afternoon in the park near my house. Because the park was quiet and close by, I became confident riding on the road later.

建議: Your answer gives an opinion and some reason but is partially unclear and slightly ungrammatical. Improve by stating your opinion clearly, using linking words (for example, because, therefore), and providing a specific example or brief comparison. Avoid vague phrases and complete your final sentence.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they are cheaper and often faster than cars in congested areas. For example, many people commute short distances by bike, especially in neighborhoods where shops and schools are nearby, so they can avoid traffic and parking problems.

× I think yes because using cars these days actually can stalk you in a traffic.

✓ I think so, because using cars these days can actually leave you stuck in traffic.

The sentence has awkward structure and word choice. 'I think yes' is unnatural in this context; use 'I think so'. 'Using cars these days actually can stalk you' is incorrect: 'stalk' is the wrong verb and the modal word order is awkward. Also 'in a traffic' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'in traffic' without an article. Suggestion: use natural collocations ('stuck in traffic') and place adverbs ('actually') near the verb: 'can actually leave you stuck in traffic.'

× So I think it's more convenient to ride a bike when you know it's near your home or the distance is not that far enough for you to

✓ So I think it's more convenient to ride a bike when your destination is near your home or the distance is not far.

The original has tense and phrasing problems and an unfinished ending. 'When you know it's near your home' is vague; better to say 'when your destination is near your home.' 'The distance is not that far enough for you to' is ungrammatical: 'not that far enough' is redundant and the sentence lacks a verb phrase to complete 'for you to...'. Suggestion: simplify to 'the distance is not far' or 'the distance is short' to make a complete, grammatical sentence.