自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Bạn đã chỉ lặp lại câu hỏi của giám khảo thay vì trả lời. Cần trả lời trực tiếp, đưa câu chủ đề rõ ràng, kèm 1–2 chi tiết hỗ trợ và tối đa 5 câu. Dùng liên từ đơn giản nếu thêm thông tin (for example, because, so).

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was about seven. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels, and I rode it to visit my cousins every weekend. Because my parents lived nearby, I learned to ride quickly and felt very confident.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và sai ngữ pháp; bạn lặp lại và thay đổi nội dung thành một cụm không phù hợp (‘folklore’). Hãy trả lời trực tiếp, nêu ý kiến ngắn gọn và cung cấp lý do hoặc ví dụ cụ thể, dùng liên từ để nối ý.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are still quite popular in my country, especially in cities and rural areas. For example, many people use bicycles for short trips to the market because they are cheap and convenient. However, motorbikes are more common for longer journeys, so bike popularity varies by location.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. This is a sentence structure and pragmatic error: an answer should be a statement, not a question. Suggestion: respond with a past-tense statement (Yes/No + subject + past verb) and add details if possible, e.g., 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a blue bicycle.'

× Do you think by all folklore in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

The student used incorrect words and preposition 'by' with 'folklore', producing an ungrammatical question. The intended meaning is to ask about the popularity of bikes, so the correct form is 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?' Suggestion: use the noun 'bikes' and the adjective 'popular' with the preposition 'in' to indicate the country; keep the present simple for general opinions.