自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Correct the tense and make the response more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one brief supporting detail. Use past tense (I had) and avoid extra words. Example suggestion: “Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red one that I rode to my friend’s house every afternoon.”

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red one that I rode to my friend’s house nearly every afternoon.

建議: Improve grammar (use plural and correct tense), make the opinion direct, and provide a concise specific reason with linking words. Use linking phrases like “because” or “for example,” and keep to two to three sentences. Avoid repeating childhood info unless relevant.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and children often ride them in neighborhoods. For example, when I was young I regularly saw dozens of kids cycling around our community.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was a kid.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a kid.

This sentence mixes present tense 'have' with past time marker 'when I was a kid'. Use past tense 'had' to match the past time reference. Suggestion: use past tense consistently for past events (I had, I went, I played).

× I think bike is popular in my country because when I was a kid I always play with my friends here and I saw many children riding a bike in our community.

✓ I think bikes are popular in my country because when I was a kid I always played with my friends here and I saw many children riding bikes in our community.

Multiple errors: 'bike is' uses singular while referring generally — use plural 'bikes are' (subject-verb agreement and generalization). The clause 'when I was a kid I always play' mixes past time with present tense 'play' — use past 'played'. Also 'a bike' and 'riding a bike' in a general sense should be plural 'bikes' or 'riding bikes'. Suggestions: use plural for general statements about a type (bikes are popular), keep past tense for past habits (I always played), and pluralize repeated nouns when speaking generally (children riding bikes).