自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be careful with tense and provide a fuller, natural response. Use past tense for past experiences, give a brief reason or detail, and keep it under five sentences. For example, start with a direct topic sentence ("No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child."), then add one supporting detail.

範例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. My family lived in a small apartment and we usually walked or took the bus, so there wasn't space to store a bicycle.

建議: Clarify grammar and use linking words to make the answer coherent. Say whether bikes are popular, give two specific reasons linked logically (e.g., traffic congestion and cost or convenience), and avoid filler words like "uh" or "umm." Keep it natural and concise.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because traffic is often heavy, so cycling is faster than driving. In addition, bikes are inexpensive to buy and maintain, which makes them a convenient option for many people.

× No, I don't have.

✓ No, I didn't.

The question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' is in the past simple. The student must answer in past simple as well. Using 'don't have' is present tense and incorrect. Use the past simple negative 'didn't' plus base form (but for 'have' the short answer can be 'No, I didn't'). Suggestion: For past experiences, use 'did' + base verb (e.g., 'No, I didn't have one').

× Yes, it's popular because, uh, the traffic is here.

✓ Yes, they are popular because traffic here is heavy.

The question asks about 'bikes' (plural). Referring to them with singular 'it's' is incorrect; use plural 'they are' or contraction 'they're'. Also 'the traffic is here' is awkward; better to say 'traffic here is heavy' or 'there is heavy traffic here.' Suggestion: Match pronoun number to the noun (bikes -> they) and use a natural expression for describing traffic.

× It's so crowded so umm, moving throughout bicycles or bike is more easier.

✓ It's so crowded, so moving around by bicycle is easier.

Multiple issues: 'moving throughout' is unnatural; use 'moving around' or 'getting around.' 'Bicycles or bike' is inconsistent; use singular or plural consistently ('by bicycle' or 'by bicycle/bikes'). 'More easier' is incorrect comparative ('easier' already comparative; 'more' is unnecessary). Also use 'is easier' (singular subject 'moving by bicycle' takes 'is'). Suggestion: Use 'getting around by bicycle is easier' or 'it's easier to get around by bike'.