自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Content: Your answer directly responds but is brief. Add a clear topic sentence and one or two specific supporting details (reason or a short example). Grammar: Correct tense and verb forms — change “didn't taught” to “didn't teach” or “never taught me.” Naturalness: Use a concise natural phrase such as “I never learned to ride.” Keep within 3–4 sentences and avoid repetition. Coherence: Use a linking word if you add another detail (e.g., “because” or “so”).

範例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. My parents never taught me how to ride, so I learned to get around on foot and by bus. Because of that, I didn't become comfortable cycling until I was much older.

建議: Content: Good direct answer and a reason. Improve specificity by giving an example of where and why people use bikes (commuting, short trips, or markets). Language: Correct “for convenient” to “because they are convenient” or “for convenience.” Add a linking word like “for example” to make it cohesive. Vocabulary: Use words like “commute,” “short journeys,” or “affordable.” Keep to 2–4 sentences total.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because they are an affordable and convenient way to travel. For example, many people use bicycles to commute to work or go to the local market, especially in crowded city areas.

× My parents didn't taught me how to ride a bike.

✓ My parents didn't teach me how to ride a bike.

When using 'did' (past auxiliary) the main verb must be in base form, not past tense. 'Didn't taught' is incorrect; use 'didn't teach'. Suggestion: Use base verb after did/didn't: 'didn't + verb (base form)'.

× They use it for convenient.

✓ They use them for convenience.

The sentence has two errors: pronoun number and word form. 'Bikes' is plural, so the pronoun should be 'them' not 'it'. Also 'convenient' is an adjective; the noun 'convenience' is required after 'for'. Suggestion: Match pronoun number to its noun and use the correct noun/adjective form: 'use them for convenience.'