自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be direct, grammatically complete and add a short supporting detail. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct tense and include a brief explanation or memory. Use linking words if you add more than one detail.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I remember riding it every weekend to visit my grandparents, and practicing until I could ride without training wheels. Because it was light and easy to handle, I quickly became confident on it.

建議: Answer directly and use correct vocabulary and grammar. Say whether you think bikes are popular and give specific reasons or examples using linking words (for example, because, so, therefore).

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many people use them for short commutes and errands because they are cheap and convenient, and the government has built many bike lanes to encourage cycling.

× I had back when I was kid.

✓ I had one back when I was a kid.

The original sentence is missing a direct object and an article before 'kid'. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26). Add the object 'one' to refer to 'a bike' and include the indefinite article 'a' before 'kid' to form a complete, grammatically correct sentence. Suggestion: include the noun or pronoun the speaker refers to ('I had one') and use the article 'a' with 'kid' ('when I was a kid').

× Yes, it's so popular to use bite in my country.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country.

The original sentence uses incorrect pronoun/word choices and wrong verb structure, creating an unclear phrase. This fits incorrect use of pronouns/word selection (ID 12) and sentence structure issues. Replace 'it's so popular to use bite' with 'bikes are very popular' to correct noun form ('bikes' plural) and verb agreement. Also change 'bite' (typo) to 'bikes' and use 'very' instead of 'so' for naturalness. Suggestion: state the subject ('bikes') in plural and use the verb 'are' for agreement: 'Bikes are very popular in my country.'