自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 用更自然和语法正确的时态与表达，并扩展回答以增加细节。可以把句子改为过去时的正确形式，先给出主题句，再用1-2句具体细节支持，使用连接词使表达连贯。例如说明什么时候有、经常和谁一起骑、骑车的感受等。

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it for my eighth birthday and rode it almost every day around my neighborhood. Often my friends and I would race to the park, which made those afternoons really fun.

建議: 回答太简短且缺乏具体理由或例子。先给出观点，然后用一两句具体原因或比较来支持，使用连接词（for example, because, due to）使逻辑更清楚。可以提到交通、基础设施或文化因素等。

範例: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country because most people prefer cars for convenience. For example, there are few dedicated bike lanes and long distances between homes and workplaces, so cycling isn't practical for many.

× When I'm a child, I used to have a bike.

✓ When I was a child, I used to have a bike.

错误类型：现在时使用不当。原句中“I’m a child”（我现在是孩子）使用了现在时，但句子要表达的是过去的状态（小时候）。应使用过去时“was”。建议：在描述过去的经历时，用过去时态（was/were）。例如“when I was a child”表示“当我小时候”。

× I don't think bikes are popular in my country.

✓ I don't think bikes are very popular in my country.

错误类型：现在时使用问题/表达不准确。原句语法本身可接受，但表达上略显绝对化或生硬，可通过添加程度副词使语气更自然和准确。建议：使用程度副词（例如 very, particularly）来更精确地表达观点；如果想保持肯定，可原句不改，但通常说法为“I don't think bikes are very popular in my country.”