自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Speak in full, grammatical sentences and organize your answer: give a clear topic sentence, then one or two specific details. Use correct verb forms and avoid redundancy. For example, say when you used your brother's bike, how often, and how it made you feel. Keep it under five sentences and use linking words such as "however", "sometimes" or "because" for coherence.

範例: I didn't have my own bike when I was a child, but I sometimes borrowed my brother's. He loved cycling with his friends, so I often rode his bike when he was away. I really enjoyed those rides because they made me feel free and confident. Now I am thinking of buying my own bike so I can ride more often.

建議: Begin with a clear opinion, then support it with specific, relevant details and linking words. Correct awkward phrases and provide concrete examples or reasons (e.g. commuting, sport, inexpensive). Avoid repetition and keep answers concise (max 5 sentences).

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them to commute and for exercise. For instance, my family bought three or four bikes for my brother and his friends since he loves cycling. Additionally, city bike lanes and affordable prices make cycling an easy choice for students and workers. Personally, I haven't asked for a bike before, but I see many people cycling every day.

× Actually haven't a bike when I was a child but sometime I was of of your use of used my brother's bike and I really enjoy it.

✓ Actually I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but sometimes I used my brother's bike and I really enjoyed it.

Multiple issues: missing subject with auxiliary verb and incorrect verb forms. 'Haven't a bike' is incorrect for past possession; use past simple 'didn't have'. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. 'I was of of your use of used' is garbled; correct phrase is 'I used my brother's bike'. Maintain past tense 'enjoyed' to match 'was a child'. Suggest reading sentences aloud to catch missing subjects and ensure verbs match the past timeframe. (ID reference: 26)

× I think I will buy one for now.

✓ I think I will buy one now.

'For now' implies a temporary state; 'now' fits the intended meaning of immediate intention. The structure 'I think I will buy one now' properly expresses a future intention. Also ensure consistency: if speaking about childhood, clarify shift to present/future by context. (ID reference: 7)

× Yes, of course, I'm sure that bikes are popular in my country.

✓ Yes, of course. I'm sure that bikes are popular in my country.

Mainly punctuation and sentence clarity rather than tense; the original is grammatically acceptable but benefits from a period separating responses. 'Are popular' is correct present tense describing a general fact. No major tense change needed. (ID reference: 6)

× I use like I I used my family used to buy 3/4 for my my brother 'cause he loves cycling and with his friends, but me, I've never asked him.

✓ For example, my family used to buy three or four bikes for my brother because he loves cycling with his friends, but I never asked him for one.

Original has repeated words, wrong verb forms, and unclear quantifier '3/4'. Use 'used to' for habitual past: 'my family used to buy'. Write numbers as words in speech: 'three or four'. Remove redundant pronouns and correct phrase order: 'because he loves cycling with his friends' and 'I never asked him for one' (complete object). This fixes subject-verb and sentence structure issues and makes the meaning clear. (ID reference: 26)

× but me, I've never asked him.

✓ But I never asked him.

Use subject pronoun 'I' rather than 'me' at the start of a clause. 'Me' is an object pronoun and cannot function as the subject. 'I've never asked him' is acceptable but 'I never asked him' matches simple past context. Keep pronoun case consistent with tense. (ID reference: 12)