自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答直接但过于简短，缺乏细节和连接词。建议在开头用一个主题句明确回答，然后用1–2个补充句说明是谁买的、什么时候开始、是否常用以及你对这辆自行车的感受或记忆，使用连接词使表达更连贯。例如可以说明骑车的频率、学会骑车的经历或与家人共享的细节。

範例: Yes, I did. When I was in primary school my mother bought a bicycle for me and my sibling, and we learned to ride it that summer. We used it almost every day to go to school and play in the park, so I have fond memories of practicing balancing and racing with neighbors.

建議: 答案简洁但表达有些笼统，缺乏具体例证和连接词。建议先给出明确观点，然后用具体事实或对比来支持，例如说明在哪些城市或人群中普及、通勤或休闲用途、以及原因（如交通拥堵、环保或基础设施）。使用连接词（for example, because, so）让论述更有说服力。

範例: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country because many people use them for commuting and exercise. For example, in big cities you often see dedicated bike lanes and commuters riding to work, while in smaller towns bikes are common for short errands and leisure rides.

× Yes, when I was in primary school my mom bought us a bike.

✓ Yes, when I was in primary school my mom bought me a bike.

句中使用了“bought us a bike”。根据上下文，考生是以第一人称单数回答“Did you have a bike when you were a child?” 问句询问“你”个人，故受益者应为“me”（我），而不是“us”（我们）。这里是单数与复数/对象代词选择错误，应把“us”改为“me”。建议：想清楚句子主语和动作的直接/间接受体，若动作只影响说话者，使用单数代词“me”。

× Yes, it's very popular. You can see people ride a bike in every city.

✓ Yes, they're very popular. You can see people riding bikes in every city.

原句有多个问题：1) “it's very popular” 指代复数名词“bikes”，应使用复数谓语“they're”或改为“This is very popular”并指单一概念；2) “You can see people ride a bike” 不符合常用表达，习惯用法是“see people doing sth.”（see + 人 + doing），所以应用动名词“riding”；3) “a bike” 在泛指多数人的习惯行为时，通常用复数“bikes”。因此改为“they're very popular. You can see people riding bikes in every city.” 建议：注意主语与谓语的一致（单复数），并用动名词结构表达“看到人们在做某事”。