自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and fix tense and article errors (e.g., say “I had a favourite bike my father bought me” and explain why it mattered).

範例: Yes, I had a favourite bike when I was a child. My father bought it for my seventh birthday, and I used to ride it to school and around the neighborhood every day. Because it was my first bike, I felt proud and independent, which motivated me to practice until I became confident.

建議: Give a direct answer first, then support it with two clear, specific reasons using linking words. Remove fillers (uh, you know) and correct comparative structure ("less popular than before").

範例: No, I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country nowadays. Firstly, many people prefer motorbikes and cars because they are faster and more convenient for long distances. Secondly, increased traffic and limited bike lanes have made cycling less safe, so fewer people choose bikes than they did in the past.

× And to be honest, I was.

✓ And to be honest, I was happy.

The original sentence 'And to be honest, I was.' is incomplete and vague because the verb 'was' (past tense of 'be') requires a complement (adjective or clause) to show the state. Add a predicate adjective like 'happy' to complete the thought and match past tense context. Suggestion: Always provide the complement after 'was' when describing past states (e.g., 'I was excited').

× I wasn't expect.

✓ I didn't expect it.

The phrase 'I wasn't expect' incorrectly mixes the past continuous/negative form of 'be' with the base verb 'expect'. The correct negative past simple uses 'did not' + base verb: 'I didn't expect'. Add 'it' as the object for clarity. Suggestion: Use 'didn't' + base verb for negative past simple (e.g., 'I didn't know').

× Uh, to be honest, uh no, right now there are many motorbikes uh cars uh, or something like that, but not just bikes, because bikes are not uh now common, you know uh are not that popular than previously.

✓ Uh, to be honest, no. Right now there are many motorbikes and cars, but not many bicycles, because bikes are not as common now as they were previously.

This long sentence contains multiple issues: incorrect conjunctions/commas and comparison structure. Use 'and' to join 'motorbikes and cars'. 'Not just bikes' is unclear; 'not many bicycles' is clearer. The comparative 'not that popular than previously' is wrong: use 'not as ... as' for comparisons ('not as common now as they were previously'). Also prefer 'bicycles' or 'bikes' consistently. Suggestion: Break long spoken sentences into shorter clauses, use 'and' for lists, and use 'not as ... as' for comparisons (e.g., 'X is not as Y as it was before').