自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is short and has grammatical errors. Start with a clear past-tense topic sentence, then add one or two brief supporting details (reason or memory). Use past simple for childhood and keep length under five sentences. For example, say you didn’t have one and explain why or mention an alternative (e.g., walked or used public transport).

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family couldn’t afford one, so I usually walked to school with friends. Occasionally we borrowed a neighbour’s bike for short rides.

建議: The answer is unclear and contains fillers and wrong words. Give a direct opinion sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words (for example, because or for instance). Avoid fillers and pronunciation mistakes in the recorded test. Mention examples such as commuting, exercise, or cultural reasons to be specific.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them to commute to work and school. For example, in cities you can see many cycle lanes and students riding bikes every morning.

× No, I have no bike.

✓ No, I did not have a bike.

The examiner asked about the past ('when you were a child'), so the student should use past tense. Using present tense 'have' is incorrect here. Use past simple 'did not have' to match the time reference. Suggestion: use past simple for statements about past situations (e.g., 'I did not have a bike').

× Yes, thank you by, uh, popular in, in our country because many people like pie.

✓ Yes, they are popular in our country because many people like bikes.

This sentence has multiple problems: awkward phrasing and wrong words. The response should answer the present-general question about popularity, so use present simple 'they are popular'. 'Thank you by, uh,' is irrelevant and makes the sentence ungrammatical, and 'pie' is likely a mispronunciation of 'bike(s)'. Also ensure correct plural 'bikes' to match the subject. Suggestion: remove filler that doesn't add meaning, use 'they are popular' for general statements, and use the correct noun 'bikes'.