自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Give a direct, past-tense response about childhood, use a clear topic sentence, and add one brief supporting detail using linking words. Keep it natural and within 2–3 sentences. For example, say whether you had a bike, then explain why or give a short reason or memory.

範例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. Instead, I usually walked to school because my family couldn't afford one, so I learned to enjoy walking and spending time with friends.

建議: Your answer has a good main idea but is partly incomplete and contains grammar and clarity issues. Start with a clear topic sentence, then provide one or two specific supporting details using linking words (for example, because, for instance). Avoid fragments and unclear numbers; give a complete example or statistic if you mention one.

範例: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country because they are convenient and inexpensive. For example, many people ride bikes to work or school, especially in cities where traffic is heavy, and some surveys show that around 30–40% of short journeys are made by bicycle.

× No, I have not a bike when I will retire, because when I will retire I only have bicycle.

✓ No, I did not have a bike when I was a child.

The student is answering a past question ('Did you have a bike when you were a child?') but uses incorrect tenses and forms. Errors: 'have not a bike' is wrong for past negative (should be 'did not have'), 'when I will retire' is irrelevant and future tense is incorrect in this context, and 'I only have bicycle' mixes present tense and missing article. Suggestion: Use simple past for past situations: 'I did not have a bike when I was a child.' Keep tense consistent and include the article 'a' before singular countable nouns.

× Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country because they are convenient and inexpensive to get.

✓ Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country because they are convenient and inexpensive to use.

The sentence mainly uses correct present tense but the collocation 'inexpensive to get' is unnatural; 'to use' or 'to buy' fits better. 'Get' is vague. Suggestion: Use 'to use' when referring to riding or employing bicycles; use 'to buy' if referring to cost.

× For example, many people in my country use bikes for. For work 80.

✓ For example, many people in my country use bikes for work; about 80 percent do so.

The original fragment is incomplete and ungrammatical: 'use bikes for.' lacks an object, and 'For work 80.' is a fragment with unclear meaning. Suggested correction completes the thought and gives a clear statistic phrase. Use 'about 80 percent' or 'around 80% of people' for clarity and include a verb phrase 'do so' or 'use them' to avoid sentence fragments.