自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be natural and clear: correct mistakes, use a topic sentence then give one or two specific supporting details linked with a connector. Avoid abbreviations and unclear words (e.g., “Rd.”). Include a brief mention of when or who taught you to ride or a memory to make it more vivid.

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bike when I was about seven, and I used to ride it around our neighborhood every afternoon. Because my friends and I loved racing, we often rode together to the nearby park, which helped me become more confident on two wheels.

建議: Answer directly and support with a clear reason using linking words. Use specific evidence (who uses bikes and why) and avoid filler words. Correct grammar (include article: the Philippines) and choose a more appropriate noun than “customers” (e.g., cyclists, commuters, buyers).

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in the Philippines because many people use them for daily commuting and exercise. For example, in cities you can see many commuters and delivery riders on bicycles, and recently more people have been buying bikes due to traffic and the desire to stay healthy.

× Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to Rd. it around the neighborhood.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it around the neighborhood.

The phrase 'used to' should be followed by the base form of the verb, not an abbreviation or incorrect form. 'Rd.' appears to be an incorrect abbreviation for 'ride'. Use the full base verb 'ride' after 'used to'. Suggestion: write the full verb and avoid abbreviations in spoken or written answers.

× Yes, I do think that bikes are popular in Philippines since there are a lot of, uh customers waiting to purchase.

✓ Yes, I do think that bikes are popular in the Philippines since there are a lot of customers waiting to purchase them.

The noun 'Philippines' as a country requires the definite article 'the' ('the Philippines'). Also, the verb 'purchase' is transitive and needs an object; add 'them' to refer to bikes. Remove filler 'uh' in formal responses. Suggestion: use 'the Philippines' and include the object after 'purchase' or rephrase 'waiting to buy bikes'.