自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear and natural, with a relevant personal detail and a short reflection. To improve, make the response more concise and more logically structured: start with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words (for example, 'but' or 'because'). Avoid repetition ('No, no') and reduce extra filler words. Also vary vocabulary slightly (use 'bicycle' or 'my dad's bike') and keep to 2–4 sentences.

範例: No, I didn't have a bicycle as a child. I learned to ride my father's bike when I was a teenager, which was difficult at first because I was afraid of falling. Fortunately my father patiently taught me, and I'm grateful because it gave me confidence and independence.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Improve clarity by using a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words (for example, 'because' and 'however'). Correct grammar (e.g., 'more popular than' not 'as of') and be specific about what 'real facility' means (public transport). Keep responses concise and coherent.

範例: Bicycles are not very popular in my country; motorbikes and scooters are far more common. This is mainly because scooters are cheaper and more practical for longer trips, and there is a lack of reliable public transport such as a metro, so people prefer motorbikes.

× No, no, I didn't have any bike when I was a child, but when I was a teenager I learned to ride a bike of my father's and it was kind of tough during that time.

✓ No, no, I didn't have any bikes when I was a child, but when I was a teenager I learned to ride my father's bike and it was kind of tough at that time.

'Any bike' is incorrect; after 'any' with countable nouns plural form 'bikes' is required for general negation. 'A bike of my father's' is awkward; use the possessive phrase 'my father's bike'. 'During that time' is unnatural here; 'at that time' fits better for a specific past period. Suggestion: use plural after 'any' for general negation and prefer a concise possessive form.'

× Talking about bicycle, they are not that popular in my country as of motorbikes and scooters, they are more popular because it is more convenient for people to purchase it and there is no metro and real facility for.

✓ Talking about bicycles, they are not as popular in my country as motorbikes and scooters; the latter are more popular because they are more convenient to buy and there is no metro or good public transport facilities.

Several preposition and article issues: 'Talking about bicycle' should be 'Talking about bicycles' (use plural). 'Not that popular ... as of motorbikes' is incorrect; use comparison structure 'not as popular ... as motorbikes'. 'More popular because it is more convenient for people to purchase it' has pronoun and preposition errors; use plural subject 'they' and 'to buy' instead of 'to purchase it'. 'There is no metro and real facility for' is incomplete and wrong preposition; use 'or good public transport facilities'. Suggestion: use correct comparative structure 'not as ... as', match pronouns and use clear prepositions for facilities.'