自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve grammar (use correct past tense and subject-verb agreement), give a clear topic sentence and add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep it natural and under five sentences.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. In fact, it was a small red bicycle with training wheels, and I learned to ride it in the park near my home. Because I practiced every weekend, I became confident riding on quiet streets by the age of eight.

建議: Correct grammar (subject-verb agreement and avoid repetition), start with a direct topic sentence, then give specific reasons or examples and use linking words for coherence. Stay within five sentences.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, many people use bicycles for short commutes and shopping because they are cheap and avoid traffic. Additionally, cities have been improving bike lanes, so more commuters choose cycling for environmental and health reasons.

× Yes, I have a bike when I were a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

This sentence uses the wrong tense forms: 'have' is present tense but the time reference 'when I was a child' requires past tense. Also 'were' is incorrect for the singular subject 'I' in past indicative; the correct form is 'was'. Use 'had' (past of 'have') and 'was' (past of 'be') to match the past time frame. Suggestion: Replace present-tense verbs with their past-tense forms to maintain consistent past narration: 'had' and 'was'.

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because everyone else, everyone have a bikes.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because everyone else, everyone has a bike.

The pronoun 'everyone' is singular and requires a singular verb: use 'has' not 'have' (subject-verb agreement). Also 'a bikes' mixes singular article 'a' with plural noun 'bikes'; use singular 'a bike' or plural 'bikes' without 'a'. The phrase 'everyone else, everyone' is redundant; keep one 'everyone' or clarify meaning. Suggestion: Use 'everyone has a bike' or 'many people have bikes' depending on intended meaning.