自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be clear and consistent: start with a direct topic sentence answering the question, then give one or two specific supporting details using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid contradictions (student first says “Yes” then “didn't have a bike”). Use past tense consistently and give concrete examples (how you used the bike, who you rode with, where you went). Keep it to no more than 4–5 sentences.

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. Instead, I usually walked or took the bus to school. Occasionally I borrowed a bicycle from a neighbor to ride around the park with my friends on weekends.

建議: Answer directly, then give clear reasons with linking words. Use accurate vocabulary and grammar: say whether bikes are popular, then explain why with specific examples (traffic, public transport availability, safety concerns). Keep sentences concise and coherent.

範例: I don’t think bicycles are very popular in my country. Mainly people prefer motorcycles and jeeps because public transport is frequent and distances can be long. Also, heavy traffic and safety concerns make many people avoid cycling in cities.

× Yes, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student answered contradictorily: the examiner asked if they had a bike, so use positive past tense 'had' not negative 'didn't have'. This is a sentence structure and tense meaning error. Suggestion: use 'I had' to state possession in the past; use 'didn't have' only when denying possession.'

× I used it as a transportation, going to school from home, and you see it also with my friends hanging together.

✓ I used it for transportation, to go to school from home, and I also used it to hang out with my friends.

Several errors: 'used it as a transportation' is incorrect; 'transportation' is uncountable and you say 'for transportation' (preposition error, but primarily structure). 'going to school from home' should be an infinitive 'to go to school from home' to show purpose. 'you see it also with my friends hanging together' is unclear and ungrammatical; corrected to 'I also used it to hang out with my friends' to express riding while meeting friends. Suggestion: use 'used it for transportation', use infinitive for purpose, and use clear subject-verb clauses for activities.'

× I don't think it's necessary to have a bike in my country because of no middle numbers of motorcycles, cars, jeepneys, public transportations that can cause accidents.

✓ I don't think it is necessary to have a bike in my country because there are many motorcycles, cars, jeepneys, and other public transport vehicles that can cause accidents.

Multiple issues: 'it's' is informal but acceptable; however the phrase 'because of no middle numbers of' is ungrammatical. Use 'there are many' to indicate quantity (there be issue and pluralization). 'public transportations' is incorrect: 'transportation' is uncountable or use 'public transport vehicles'. This combines Errors 3 (There be), 11 (prepositions), 14 (quantifiers), 22 (article errors), and 27 (subject-verb agreement). Suggestion: rephrase using 'there are many' + plural nouns, and replace 'public transportations' with 'public transport vehicles' or just 'public transport'.