自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be direct, use correct tense and grammar, and give a concise reason with one clear supporting detail. Limit to 2–4 sentences and use linking words for clarity. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then add a brief reason using words like "because" or "so."

範例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. I preferred cars because my family owned a small car and I felt more comfortable riding in four-wheelers. As a result, I never learned to ride a bicycle.

建議: Give a clear topic sentence, correct singular/plural forms, and add a specific example or contrast. Use linking words such as "because" and "for example" to make your reason more convincing. Keep answers natural and avoid repetition.

範例: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country because they are affordable and practical for short trips. For example, many students and office workers cycle to work or school to avoid traffic and save money.

× No, whenever I was child, I have no bike.

✓ No, whenever I was a child, I did not have a bike.

Singular and plural issue plus tense: 'child' needs the article 'a' ('a child'). 'Have' is present tense but the context is past, so use 'did not have'. Suggestion: use 'a child' and past simple 'did not have' for past habits or states.

× Uh, basically I don't like bike.

✓ Uh, basically I don't like bikes.

Incorrect use of singular noun with general preference: When speaking about a general category, use the plural 'bikes' or use the article 'a' ('a bike'). Suggestion: say 'I don't like bikes' to express a general dislike.

× I enjoy four Wheeler from the beginning of my life.

✓ I have enjoyed four-wheelers since the beginning of my life.

Tense and noun form: 'from the beginning of my life' should be 'since the beginning of my life' and 'enjoy' for a long period should be present perfect 'have enjoyed'. Also 'four Wheeler' should be plural or hyphenated 'four-wheelers'. Suggestion: use present perfect + 'since' for an action continuing from a point in the past to present.

× Uh, I'm comfort with it.

✓ Uh, I'm comfortable with it.

Wrong word form: 'comfort' is a noun/verb; the correct adjective to describe a feeling is 'comfortable'. Suggestion: use the adjective 'comfortable' after the verb 'be'.

× Yes, bike is popular in our country, uh, because most of the people, uh, can afford it.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in our country because most people can afford them.

Singular/plural and article use: Use plural 'bikes' for general statements and plural verb 'are'. 'Most of the people' can be simplified to 'most people'. 'It' is incorrect for plural 'bikes'; use 'them'. Suggestion: use plural noun and matching plural pronoun and verb.

× So that it is popular in our country.

✓ So they are popular in our country.

Sentence structure and pronoun reference: 'So that it is popular' is awkward and uses singular 'it' incorrectly. Better to link cause and effect simply: 'So they are popular in our country.' Suggestion: match number and use clear subject ('they') for plural 'bikes'.